Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
Yes, I understand myself pressing something.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
Well, this is this is very nice and she is interesting.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
I feel impatient.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Yeah, that's my job. That's my job, that's my job.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
It's not been easy man. I get more patient.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然且不直接回应问题,表达含糊不清。建议直接回答问题,并用具体例子说明自己的耐心程度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can stay calm even in stressful situations, like waiting in long queues without getting frustrated.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 10.0Gợi ý: 回答与问题无关,内容混乱且无逻辑。建议直接说明让你感到不耐烦的具体原因,并用连接词组织语言。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a long time without any clear information, because it makes me anxious and frustrated.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和支持内容。建议扩展回答,说明原因或举例。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to do something for a long time because it can be boring and tiring, especially if the task is repetitive.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且缺乏具体内容。建议明确说明工作中需要耐心的方面,并举例说明。
Ví dụ: Yes, my job requires a lot of patience because I often have to deal with difficult customers and solve their problems calmly.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清且口语化过强。建议用更正式和清晰的语言表达比较,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I am more patient now than when I was a child because I have learned to control my emotions better through life experiences.
× Yes, I understand myself pressing something.
✓ Yes, I understand myself getting impatient.
原句结构不正确,'understand myself pressing something'表达不清。应使用'getting impatient'来表达'我感到不耐烦'的意思。建议使用更准确的表达方式。
× Well, this is this is very nice and she is interesting.
✓ Well, she is very nice and interesting.
原句重复且结构混乱,'this is this is'重复且不符合语境。应直接说'她很友好且有趣',简洁明了。
× It's not been easy man.
✓ It hasn't been easy, man.
原句中'It's not been'时态错误,应使用现在完成时的否定形式'It hasn't been',表示到目前为止的状态。
× I get more patient.
✓ I am more patient now.
原句时态不当,'I get more patient'表达不准确。应使用现在时态'be'动词,表达现在的状态。