Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“planning a tomato”应为“planting a tomato”，“kept it balance of humility”应为“kept a balance of humidity”。建议注意动词形式和名词搭配，避免表达不清。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. Last month, I successfully planted a tomato plant. During the process, I watered it regularly and maintained a proper balance of humidity and temperature to help it grow well.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“defeating again and again make me feels impatient”应为“being defeated again and again makes me feel impatient”。建议加强语法基础，注意主谓一致和动词形式。

Ví dụ: From my perspective, being defeated repeatedly makes me feel impatient. For example, last year I tried to grow tomatoes, and despite watering them regularly and maintaining the right humidity and temperature, I failed, which made me feel frustrated.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然，且句子不完整，如“finally, I succeeded in”后缺少内容。建议注意句子完整性和自然表达。

Ví dụ: I usually feel patient when I have to do something for a long time. For example, last year I planted a tomato plant, and I had to water it regularly and maintain the right humidity and temperature. In the end, I succeeded in growing healthy tomatoes.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“lawyers requires”应为“lawyers require”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my dream job is to be a lawyer, and this profession requires a lot of patience. Lawyers need to remember and learn many legal provisions, so patience is essential in this field.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，如“I'm studying lower now”不明确，且语法错误较多。建议使用更清晰的表达，并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Especially now that I am studying law, it is essential to be patient to memorize and understand various legal provisions. Moreover, patience helps me appreciate the complexities of legal practice.

× Last month I succeeded in planning a tomato and during the planation I watered it regularly as well as to kept it balance of humility and temperature to ensure that it can grow well.

✓ Last month I succeeded in planting a tomato and during the plantation I watered it regularly as well as kept its balance of humidity and temperature to ensure that it could grow well.

这里的动词时态应使用过去式，'kept' 是过去式，'to kept' 是错误的形式，应去掉 'to'。另外，'planting' 比 'planning' 更合适，'plantation' 拼写错误，应为 'plantation'。'humility' 应为 'humidity'。

× during the planation I watered it regularly as well as to kept it balance of humility and temperature

✓ during the plantation I watered it regularly as well as kept its balance of humidity and temperature

'as well as to kept' 中 'to' 不应出现，'kept' 直接跟在 'as well as' 后面。'balance of humility' 应为 'balance of humidity'。

× This plantation in.

✓ This plantation ended.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致句意不明。应补充完整表达。

× defeating again and again make me feels impatient.

✓ defeating again and again makes me feel impatient.

主语是单数短语 'defeating again and again'，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'makes'，'feel' 不加 's'。

× I planned to grow tomatoes and during this plantation, although I watered it regularly as well as to kept it balance on humility and temperature

✓ I planned to grow tomatoes and during this plantation, although I watered it regularly as well as kept its balance of humidity and temperature

'to kept' 中 'to' 不应出现，'balance on humility' 应为 'balance of humidity'。

× I still lost and I feel impatient.

✓ I still lost and I felt impatient.

前半句是过去时，后半句应保持时态一致，改为过去时 'felt'。

× I always feel patient if I need to do something for a long time.

✓ I always feel patient if I need to do something for a long time.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× last year I was required to plan a tomato and during the plantation I need to water it regularly as well as to maintain its balance of its humidity and temperature.

✓ last year I was required to plant a tomato and during the plantation I needed to water it regularly as well as maintain its balance of humidity and temperature.

'plan a tomato' 应为 'plant a tomato'，'need' 应改为过去式 'needed'，'to maintain' 中 'to' 可省略。

× And finally, I succeeded in.

✓ And finally, I succeeded.

句子不完整，'succeeded in' 后应接具体内容，若无则去掉 'in'。

× lawyers requires to remember and learn a lot of provisions of law

✓ lawyers require remembering and learning a lot of provisions of law

'lawyers' 是复数，谓语动词应为 'require'，'requires' 是单数形式。'to remember and learn' 改为动名词形式更自然。

× lawyers requires to remember and learn a lot of provisions of law

✓ lawyers require remembering and learning a lot of provisions of law

'requires to remember' 结构不正确，动词 'require' 后应接动名词形式。

× Especially I'm studying lower now.

✓ Especially I'm studying law now.

'lower' 拼写错误，应为 'law'。

× Furthermore, it also important for me to be patient with the legal art.

✓ Furthermore, it is also important for me to be patient with legal arts.

缺少系动词 'is'，'legal art' 应为复数 'legal arts'。