Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you a patient person?
Thí sinh
It depends. If I have a strong interested in doing something I will be patient enough to complete it, but if it's boring and overwhelming I will give it up very quickly.
Giám khảo
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Thí sinh
I feel impatient when I have to wait to get a table in the restaurant because sometimes there is a long queue for such restaurant and I think it is a waste of time.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Thí sinh
It depends. Just as I mentioned, if something is interesting I will quite patient enough to complete it. But if it's boring and troublesome, I don't want to do it at all. But I think most of the time I have to do something for a long time which make me feel overwhelmed.
Giám khảo
Does your job require you to be patient?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely during my previous internship there are many statistics and data I should I should do and they are quite difficult for me. So if I lose patient I would do not complete my test. So I have to be patient enough to deal with them.
Giám khảo
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child I was not patient because at that time my parents forced to forced me to attend many activities which made me feel stressed. But now I think I can do something I'm interested in, so I'm more patient than before.
Are you a patient person?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和用词需更准确,避免拼写错误,如“interested”应为“interest”。句子结构应更自然,避免重复表达。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: It depends. If I have a strong interest in something, I am patient enough to complete it. However, if the task is boring and overwhelming, I tend to give up quickly.
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但表达稍显重复和啰嗦。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I feel impatient when I have to wait for a table at a restaurant because long queues waste my time.
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“quite patient”应为“quite patient”或“patient enough”,句子结构重复且不够连贯。建议简化表达,避免重复,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: It depends. If the task is interesting, I am patient enough to finish it. However, if it is boring and troublesome, I feel overwhelmed and reluctant to continue.
Does your job require you to be patient?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误,如“should I should do”、“lose patient”、“do not complete my test”。建议注意语法准确性,简化句子,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. During my previous internship, I had to work with many statistics and data, which were quite difficult. Therefore, I had to be patient to complete my tasks successfully.
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复表达“forced to forced me”,语法需改进。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并增加连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child. Back then, my parents forced me to attend many activities, which made me feel stressed. Now, I can choose what interests me, so I am more patient.
× If I have a strong interested in doing something I will be patient enough to complete it
✓ If I have a strong interest in doing something I will be patient enough to complete it
这里的名词interest是可数名词,表示兴趣,应该用单数形式interest,而不是形容词interested。
× sometimes there is a long queue for such restaurant
✓ sometimes there is a long queue for such a restaurant
此处缺少冠词a,表示“这样的一个餐厅”,英语中单数可数名词前需要冠词。
× if something is interesting I will quite patient enough to complete it
✓ if something is interesting I will be quite patient enough to complete it
句中缺少动词be,且patient是形容词,前面需要be动词。这里主要是句子结构错误,属于句子结构错误(26),但也涉及动词缺失。
× if something is interesting I will quite patient enough to complete it
✓ if something is interesting I will be quite patient enough to complete it
句子缺少be动词,导致结构不完整。正确表达应为“I will be quite patient”。
× most of the time I have to do something for a long time which make me feel overwhelmed
✓ most of the time I have to do something for a long time which makes me feel overwhelmed
关系代词which指代前面的单数something,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数makes。
× during my previous internship there are many statistics and data I should I should do
✓ during my previous internship there were many statistics and data I should do
描述过去的实习经历,时态应为过去时,there be结构中的be动词应改为were。
× So if I lose patient I would do not complete my test
✓ So if I lose patience I would not complete my test
这里patient是形容词,表示有耐心的人,应该用名词patience表示耐心;另外,否定结构“would not”应放在动词前。
× So I have to be patient enough to deal with them
✓ So I have to be patient enough to deal with them
此句无语法错误,保持不变。
× when I was a child I was not patient because at that time my parents forced to forced me to attend many activities
✓ when I was a child I was not patient because at that time my parents forced me to attend many activities
动词forced重复出现,应去掉多余的forced。
× But now I think I can do something I'm interested in, so I'm more patient than before
✓ But now I think I can do something I'm interested in, so I'm more patient than before
此句无语法错误,保持不变。