Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak more fluently and avoid repetition and filled pauses. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details or an example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person because I can wait calmly for long-term results. For example, when I'm studying for exams I plan my time carefully and stick to my schedule, which helps me stay calm and reach my goals.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence naming a trigger, then explain briefly why it makes you impatient and how you react. Reduce hesitations and finish your sentence with a clear point. Use linking words such as "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: I feel most impatient when I wait for exam results because the outcome affects my plans. As a result, I check emails frequently and find it hard to concentrate until I get the official marks.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence about your feelings, then give a reason and one coping strategy. Use correct vocabulary: "patient" (adjective) and avoid incorrect forms like "save my patient." Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: If I have to work on something for a long time, I sometimes feel tired, but I stay patient because I focus on the end result. To cope, I break the task into smaller steps and take short breaks so I can keep going.

Gợi ý: Give a clear yes/no or short opinion sentence, then provide a specific reason related to your job. Avoid vague generalities and hesitations. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: Yes, my job does require patience because I often work on long projects that need careful attention. For example, when coordinating a team project I must listen to others and handle delays calmly.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear comparison sentence (more/less) and then explain why with a specific example from your life rather than a generic fable. Use concise linking words such as "because" and keep to two or three sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than when I was a child because experience taught me to wait for long-term results. For example, in university I learned to plan study schedules and not rush tasks, which improved my patience.

× I think that I am a patient, uh, patient person and I've learned, uh, to be a patient, uh, to, uh, reach the result.

✓ I think that I am a patient person and I've learned to be patient to reach results.

Repetition and incorrect placement of 'patient' made the sentence awkward. Use the adjective 'patient' once before 'person' and use the adjective 'patient' (or adverb 'patiently' if modifying a verb) appropriately. Also use plural 'results' or 'the result' depending on context; here 'results' is more natural. Suggestion: avoid filler words and repeat uses.

× I think that is very important, uh, for, uh, reaching the goal, uh, by patient, uh, for example.

✓ I think that is very important for reaching a goal, for example, by being patient.

Incorrect preposition 'by patient' should be 'by being patient'. Use 'a goal' or 'the goal' consistently; 'reaching a goal' is natural. Rearrange phrase for clear meaning: method expressed with 'by' + gerund ('being').

× Uh, actually, uh, I always, uh, when uh, I'm waiting, uh, for the result of my exams, I, I'm very, uh, very impatient and umm, I uh, interested in umm, more, uh, quickly I, I receive my notes and it's.

✓ Actually, when I'm waiting for the results of my exams, I am very impatient and I am interested in receiving my results more quickly.

Tense and verb form issues: use present continuous 'I'm waiting' and simple present 'I am very impatient'. 'Interested in' needs a gerund: 'interested in receiving'. Use plural 'results' for exams. Remove fillers and incomplete clause 'and it's'.

× Maybe I feel tired but actually I try to save my patient and not being hesitation to do and reach my goals because I know that the patient is very.

✓ Maybe I feel tired, but I try to stay patient and not hesitate to do things and reach my goals because I know that patience is important.

Wrong word choices: 'save my patient' and 'the patient is very' are incorrect. Use 'stay patient' or 'remain patient' and the noun 'patience'. 'Not being hesitation' should be 'not hesitate'. Complete the idea with 'patience is important'.

× Actually, it's, uh, uh, but also I think that every job, uh, requires, uh, uh, house, uh, our patient because, uh, when, uh, you do, uh, something, uh, or work, uh, something on project and you have to be, uh, very patient.

✓ Actually, yes, but I think that every job requires our patience because when you do work or work on a project, you have to be very patient.

Pronoun and noun errors: 'our patient' should be 'our patience' (noun). Remove extraneous words like 'house'. Simplify phrasing: 'do something' and 'work on a project' can be combined. Maintain consistent pronouns and clear noun forms.

× Yes, actually, uh, as I said that, uh, I'll, I have learned to be more patient, uh, to reach goals.

✓ Yes, as I said, I have learned to be more patient to reach my goals.

Tense/modal confusion: 'I'll' (I will) is incorrect here. Use present perfect 'I have learned' to indicate experience up to now. Add possessive 'my goals' for clarity and remove fillers.

× Uh, and it's very important. Uh, like, uh, for example, uh, a good example for this is a competition between a turtle and rabbit, and we learn about that story.

✓ And it's very important. For example, a good example is the competition between a turtle and a rabbit, and we learn from that story.

Article errors: use 'the competition' to refer to a specific well-known fable and 'a rabbit' requires the article 'a'. Also use 'learn from that story' rather than 'learn about that story'. Remove redundant 'for example' after 'like'.