Patience— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise, grammatical and directly answer with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid filler words and repetition. Use correct verb tenses and articles (e.g., "a patient person").

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself a patient person. I have worked as an employee for about 20 years, and those years taught me to stay calm when tasks take time. For example, I often guide junior staff calmly until they understand the process.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the cause of impatience, then give a specific example with logical linking words (because, so, for example). Reduce word repetition and correct word choice ("seasoned" vs "inexperienced").

Ví dụ: I feel most impatient when colleagues don't follow instructions. For example, as a head designer I often assign tasks to my assistant, and when he ignores my directions I get frustrated because it delays the whole project.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opening sentence about your feeling, then explain why and give a brief example. Use correct collocations ("feel stuck", "feel stressed"). Keep sentences short and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I usually feel stuck and stressed when a single task takes too long. For instance, if a design revision drags on, I become frustrated because it prevents me from starting other projects.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and contrast general job demands with your leadership role. Use correct grammar ("require patience") and clear linking phrases ("however", "as a result"). Provide one concrete example of when patience is needed.

Ví dụ: Yes, my role requires patience. A graphic designer may not always need much patience, but as head designer I must patiently explain tasks to assistants; otherwise projects get delayed, so I often spend time coaching them.

Gợi ý: Make a clear comparison: state you are more patient now and give reasons. Use correct comparative grammar and clearer explanations ("when I was a child I was less patient because my parents took care of everything"). Limit to two support sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am more patient now than as a child. When I was young my parents handled most things, so I didn't have to wait or manage responsibilities. Now I have work and a son, so I must be patient when solving problems and earning a living.

× I'm totally patient person.

✓ I'm totally a patient person.

Missing article 'a' before singular countable noun 'patient person'. Add 'a' to form correct noun phrase: 'a patient person'. Suggestion: Include appropriate articles before singular countable nouns.

× Actually, I worked since, uh, 20 years ago.

✓ Actually, I have worked since about 20 years ago.

Use present perfect 'have worked' with 'since' for an action that began in the past and continues to the present. Also use 'about' rather than a comma and '20 years ago' commonly pairs with 'for' (for 20 years) or 'since' with a point in time; here 'about 20 years' is clearer. Suggestion: Use present perfect with 'since' or 'for' for ongoing time periods.

× That means I worked, uh, as an employee.

✓ That means I worked as an employee.

Extra comma is unnecessary but core error minimal; sentence is acceptable after removing pause markers. No article error but keep structure simple. Suggestion: Remove filler words and unnecessary punctuation for clarity.

× That means I have the patient, you know, when I work, I have the patient if I want to meet me or if I want to do something.

✓ That means I have patience, you know; when I work, I am patient if I need to meet someone or if I need to do something.

Incorrect noun 'patient' used instead of abstract noun 'patience'; 'meet me' is incorrect reflexive/object choice—should be 'meet someone' or 'meet people'. Also verb form and pronoun choices adjusted for clarity. Suggestion: Use abstract noun 'patience' for the quality and use correct object pronouns or 'someone' for indefinite people.

× The impatient thing, yeah, when I work, it happens a lot of time because I'm a head designer for packing design company and I have a seasoned designer and I told him and some I give, I give to him some task, but he didn't follow my question. Follow my.

✓ The thing that makes me impatient is that, when I work, it happens often because I'm the head designer at a packaging design company and I have a junior designer. I give him tasks, but he doesn't follow my instructions.

Multiple issues: 'a lot of time' should be 'often'; 'a head designer' should be 'the head designer' for specific role; 'packing design company' better as 'packaging design company'; 'seasoned designer' contradicted by context—likely 'junior' or 'assistant'; tense agreement: use present simple 'doesn't follow' for habitual behavior; 'follow my question' incorrect—use 'follow my instructions'. Suggestion: Use consistent tense for habitual actions (present simple) and correct collocations (packaging company, head designer, follow instructions).

× Follow my.

✓ Follow my instructions.

Fragment 'Follow my' is incomplete and lacks object; 'instructions' clarifies what should be followed. Suggestion: Always include the object after verbs that require one.

× My feel is kind of stuck because I want to finish one stuff very fast and then I want to go next but I have to do one thing with the wrong time.

✓ I feel kind of stuck because I want to finish one thing very quickly and then move on, but I have to work on something for a long time.

'My feel' is incorrect; use 'I feel'. 'One stuff' should be 'one thing'. 'Very fast' as adverb should be 'very quickly'. 'Go next' unclear—use 'move on'. 'Wrong time' is unclear; likely meaning 'for a long time'. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb 'I feel', countable noun 'thing', adverb forms for verbs, and clearer time expressions.

× I feel like very stressful and frustrated on myself so I don't like to do one thing for a long time so.

✓ I feel very stressed and frustrated with myself, so I don't like to do one thing for a long time.

Use adjective 'stressed' not 'stressful' to describe feeling. 'Frustrated on myself' should be 'frustrated with myself'. Remove redundant 'so' at the end. Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms to describe feelings and 'frustrated with' for the object.

× Of course, yes, actually my job doesn't need to requirement the patient because I'm working as a graphic designer, but my position requirement patient because I'm a head designer and I have assistant designer.

✓ Of course. Actually, my job does not require patience because I'm a graphic designer, but my position requires patience because I'm the head designer and I have an assistant designer.

'Doesn't need to requirement the patient' mixes nouns and verbs incorrectly. Use 'does not require patience'. 'Requirement' is a noun; use verb 'require'. 'Patient' should be noun 'patience'. Article 'the' needed for 'the head designer' and 'an assistant designer'. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'require' and noun 'patience', and include articles for specific roles.

× So I have to give a task for to the my assistant designer, but sometimes he doesn't follow me so then time I.

✓ So I have to give tasks to my assistant designer, but sometimes he doesn't follow me, so I run out of time.

Use 'give tasks to' not 'give a task for to the my'. Remove extra articles. Added plausible ending 'run out of time' to complete sentence meaning. Suggestion: Use correct preposition 'to' after 'give' and avoid redundant articles; complete sentence with clear result.

× Are you more patient now than when you were a child? Student: Of course, yes, when I had when I was child trial, I don't have any patient because my parents do everything what they want.

✓ Of course. When I was a child, I wasn't patient because my parents did everything they wanted.

Use past tense 'wasn't' and 'did' for past habits. 'When I was child trial' is incorrect phrasing; 'when I was a child' is correct. 'Don't have any patient' should be 'wasn't patient'. 'Do everything what they want' should be 'did everything they wanted.' Suggestion: Use past tense for past states and correct word order.

× So I don't need patience. That means I have I was a happy life.

✓ So I didn't need patience. That means I had a happy life.

Tense inconsistency: use past tense 'didn't need' and 'had'. Original mixes present and past. 'I have I was a happy life' is ungrammatical and needs simplification. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use simple constructions: 'I had a happy life.'

× But for now I need more patience because I'm working and I have to live by my son, so I need to earn money. That means I have.

✓ But now I need more patience because I'm working and I have to take care of my son, so I need to earn money.

'Live by my son' is incorrect; likely intended 'take care of my son' or 'provide for my son.' 'That means I have' fragment incomplete. Use present tense 'need' and complete the thought. Suggestion: Use correct verb phrases like 'take care of' or 'provide for' and finish sentences fully.