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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Thí sinh

I think I will like my computer because I can studying or playing some video game with my friends. It can help me lay my head out and I can feel a good mood from all day.

Giám khảo

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Thí sinh

Writing a board matches is is important because it can let my house always clean and I I think it's easier can easy easy to use.

Giám khảo

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Thí sinh

Well, I always read the instructions because much is all the machines in my house have a lot of several function. So I need to read all the instruction before using this.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Thí sinh

Yeah, yeah. Yes, of course, when you are the risk instruction, you can know all the function of this machine. So I think this machine can get into a waste if you cannot own, cannot know the.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi sai như 'I can studying' nên là 'I can study'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý rõ ràng, tự nhiên và ngắn gọn hơn.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is my computer because I can study and play video games with my friends. It helps me relax and improves my mood throughout the day.

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ đúng ngữ cảnh, ví dụ 'Writing a board matches' không phù hợp với câu hỏi. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Đồng thời, nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help keep my house clean and are easy to use.

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'much is all the machines' không đúng, nên nói 'most of the machines'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions because most machines in my house have many functions. So, I need to understand them before using the machines.

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ đúng ngữ cảnh, ví dụ 'risk instruction' không phù hợp, nên là 'read the instructions'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn để truyền đạt ý hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. Reading the instructions is important because it helps you understand all the functions of the machine. Otherwise, the machine might be wasted if you don't know how to use it properly.

Ngữ pháp

Future tense issue

× I think I will like my computer because I can studying or playing some video game with my friends.

I think I will like my computer because I can study or play some video games with my friends.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. Also, 'video game' should be plural 'video games' to match the context.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It can help me lay my head out and I can feel a good mood from all day.

It can help me relax and I can feel good all day.

The phrase 'lay my head out' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'relax'. Also, 'feel a good mood from all day' is awkward; 'feel good all day' is clearer and grammatically correct.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Writing a board matches is is important because it can let my house always clean and I I think it's easier can easy easy to use.

Washing machines are important because they can keep my house always clean and I think they are easy to use.

'Writing a board matches' is incorrect; likely meant 'washing machines'. 'It' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'washing machines'. The phrase 'can easy easy to use' is incorrect; correct form is 'are easy to use'.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Well, I always read the instructions because much is all the machines in my house have a lot of several function.

Well, I always read the instructions because all the machines in my house have several functions.

'Much is all the machines' is incorrect; 'all the machines' is correct. 'A lot of several function' is redundant; 'several functions' is appropriate.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So I need to read all the instruction before using this.

So I need to read all the instructions before using them.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' as it refers to multiple steps. 'This' should be 'them' to refer back to the plural 'instructions'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, yeah. Yes, of course, when you are the risk instruction, you can know all the function of this machine.

Yes, of course, when you read the instructions, you can know all the functions of this machine.

'Are the risk instruction' is incorrect; likely meant 'read the instructions'. 'Function' should be plural 'functions'.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So I think this machine can get into a waste if you cannot own, cannot know the.

So I think this machine can become a waste if you do not know how to use it.

The phrase 'can get into a waste' is incorrect; 'become a waste' is correct. 'Cannot own, cannot know the' is unclear; corrected to 'do not know how to use it' for clarity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CleanBlank; Pure; Virtuous; Neat
EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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