Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“wash some boys or plants”不合适，且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子表达，同时避免冗余。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean clothes quickly and saves a lot of time and effort.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，如“cope with this attitude”不合适。建议用更准确的表达说明机器的重要性，并且句子结构要完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they help us save time and reduce physical effort after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，如“read instruments”应为“read instructions”，“find some heat”表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子。

Ví dụ: Definitely, I always read the instructions before using a new machine to avoid mistakes and to understand how to operate it properly.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“hind function”应为“hidden functions”，“avoid broke the machine”应为“avoid breaking the machine”。建议注意语法和用词准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because it helps us discover hidden functions and prevents us from damaging the machine.

× Well my favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it's help me to wash some boys or plants after dinner and it can relax ourselves and release our hands from long time washing which is really convenient and effective.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me to wash some clothes or plants after dinner, and it can relax us and free our hands from long-time washing, which is really convenient and effective.

这里“washing machine”前缺少定冠词“the”，因为特指家里的洗衣机；“it's help”应为“it helps”，主语是第三人称单数，动词需加-s；“some boys”应为“some clothes”，语义错误；“relax ourselves”应为“relax us”，反身代词用错；“release our hands from long time washing”表达不自然，改为“free our hands from long-time washing”。

× Well my favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it's help me to wash some boys or plants after dinner and it can relax ourselves and release our hands from long time washing which is really convenient and effective.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me to wash some clothes or plants after dinner, and it can relax us and free our hands from long-time washing, which is really convenient and effective.

“release our hands from long time washing”中“from”使用不当，表达应为“free our hands from long-time washing”，意为“解放我们的双手免于长时间洗涤”。

× Well my favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it's help me to wash some boys or plants after dinner and it can relax ourselves and release our hands from long time washing which is really convenient and effective.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me to wash some clothes or plants after dinner, and it can relax us and free our hands from long-time washing, which is really convenient and effective.

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词“help”应加-s，变为“helps”。

× Well my favorite machine in my home is washing machine because it's help me to wash some boys or plants after dinner and it can relax ourselves and release our hands from long time washing which is really convenient and effective.

✓ Well, my favorite machine in my home is the washing machine because it helps me to wash some clothes or plants after dinner, and it can relax us and free our hands from long-time washing, which is really convenient and effective.

“relax ourselves”中“ourselves”用错，主语是“it”，应使用宾格“us”。

× Well, definitely because after a long day study, we are so tired to cope with this attitude.

✓ Well, definitely because after a long day of study, we are so tired to cope with this attitude.

“a long day study”缺少介词“of”，应为“a long day of study”。

× Well, definitely because after a long day study, we are so tired to cope with this attitude.

✓ Well, definitely because after a long day of study, we are so tired to cope with this attitude.

“a long day study”中缺少介词“of”，正确表达为“a long day of study”。

× So it is important for us to have the automatic machine to save our time or help us.

✓ So it is important for us to have automatic machines to save our time or help us.

“the automatic machine”指代不明确，且前文提到多种机器，改为复数“automatic machines”更合适。

× So it is important for us to have the automatic machine to save our time or help us.

✓ So it is important for us to have automatic machines to save our time or help us.

“machine”应使用复数形式“machines”，因为通常指多种自动机器。

× Definitely because it can help us to avoid some mistake and if we don't read instruments it is easy for us to make something wrong with the machine or that machine broke.

✓ Definitely because it can help us to avoid some mistakes, and if we don't read instructions, it is easy for us to do something wrong with the machine or for the machine to break.

“avoid some mistake”应为“avoid some mistakes”，复数形式；“read instruments”应为“read instructions”，词汇错误；“make something wrong with the machine”表达不自然，改为“do something wrong with the machine”；“that machine broke”应改为“for the machine to break”，语法更准确。

× Definitely because it can help us to avoid some mistake and if we don't read instruments it is easy for us to make something wrong with the machine or that machine broke.

✓ Definitely because it can help us to avoid some mistakes, and if we don't read instructions, it is easy for us to do something wrong with the machine or for the machine to break.

“some mistake”应为复数“some mistakes”；“instruments”应为“instructions”。

× Definitely because it can help us to avoid some mistake and if we don't read instruments it is easy for us to make something wrong with the machine or that machine broke.

✓ Definitely because it can help us to avoid some mistakes, and if we don't read instructions, it is easy for us to do something wrong with the machine or for the machine to break.

“make something wrong with the machine”中“with”用法不当，改为“do something wrong with the machine”更自然。

× So every time I get a new machine I will read the instruction first.

✓ So every time I get a new machine, I will read the instructions first.

“instruction”应为复数“instructions”，因为通常说明书是多条指令。

× It also can help me to find some heat.

✓ It can also help me to find some help.

“find some heat”表达不正确，可能是想表达“find some help”，即“找到帮助”。

× Well, definitely. Firstly it can help us to find some hind function that we can't find it directly.

✓ Well, definitely. Firstly, it can help us to find some hidden functions that we can't find directly.

“hind function”应为“hidden functions”；“that we can't find it directly”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× Well, definitely. Firstly it can help us to find some hind function that we can't find it directly.

✓ Well, definitely. Firstly, it can help us to find some hidden functions that we can't find directly.

“function”应为复数“functions”，因为指多个功能。

× Second, it can help us to avoid broke the machine and can help we use it more effectively.

✓ Second, it can help us to avoid breaking the machine and can help us use it more effectively.

“avoid broke the machine”语法错误，应为“avoid breaking the machine”；“help we use”中“we”应为宾格“us”。