Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“hidden to death”不符合英语习惯表达。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法的正确性。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is definitely the air conditioner. In my hometown, the temperature usually exceeds 32°C, so without an air conditioner, it would be unbearable to stay indoors.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但可以通过使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，同时增加具体例子来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: I believe washing machines are more important because they save a lot of time, allowing people to focus on other tasks while the clothes are being cleaned. However, sweeping machines are also useful, especially for cleaning narrow or hard-to-reach areas, although they might be less essential in daily life.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在时态混用和表达不清的问题，建议注意时态一致性，并使用更准确的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is new or complicated. For example, when I bought a new washing machine, I made sure to check how much detergent should be used.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，表达清晰自然。可以尝试使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使回答更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions before using a machine, especially if it is new or complicated. For instance, when I bought a new washing machine, I carefully read the manual to understand how much detergent to use and how to operate it safely.

× Air conditioner absolutely, and in my hometown the temperature is always higher than 32°C on average, and without air conditioner I will be hidden to death.

✓ Air conditioner, absolutely. In my hometown, the temperature is always higher than 32°C on average, and without an air conditioner, I will be hidden to death.

这里缺少冠词“an”，因为“air conditioner”是可数名词，单数形式前需要冠词。

× without air conditioner I will be hidden to death.

✓ without an air conditioner, I will be baked to death.

短语“hidden to death”不符合语境，正确表达应为“baked to death”，表示“热得要命”。

× the sweeping machines are useful for cleaning narrow or hard to reach areas, but they are less essential in daily life.

✓ sweeping machines are useful for cleaning narrow or hard-to-reach areas, but they are less essential in daily life.

“hard to reach”作为形容词短语修饰“areas”时，应使用连字符连接，形成复合形容词。

× For example, when I bought a new washing machine, I will confirm I confirmed how much cleaning liquid that is used.

✓ For example, when I bought a new washing machine, I confirmed how much cleaning liquid was used.

时态不一致，句子描述过去发生的事情，应使用过去时“confirmed”和“was used”，而非将来时“will confirm”。

× I confirmed how much cleaning liquid that is used.

✓ I confirmed how much cleaning liquid was used.

“that”在此处多余，应去掉；同时“is used”应改为过去时“was used”，与主句时态一致。