Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达存在一些错误，如“stored”应为“store”，“decorated”缺少主语，且“makes the kitchen look more level”表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the refrigerator because I store all my fruit snacks in it, and it keeps the food fresh for a long time. I also use it to preserve leftovers. It is very useful and essential in our daily life. Additionally, I have decorated it with colorful fridge magnets, which make the kitchen look more lively.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“do choices more efficiently”不清楚，句子未完成。建议注意句子完整性，避免语法错误，并使用恰当的词汇表达观点。

Ví dụ: Of course, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. They save a lot of time and help people complete household chores more efficiently. For example, I have two cats at home, and using a sweeping machine helps me clean up cat hair much better than sweeping by hand.

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容完整，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't usually read the instructions before using a machine because I prefer to explore new things by myself, which I believe boosts my creativity and imagination. However, I understand that some instructions are written unclearly, which can confuse people sometimes.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“you have already got 1”不明确，且“a new tech gadgets”单复数不一致。建议注意语法准确性和表达清晰。

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the machine. For example, if you are using a smartphone, you might not need to read the instructions because you are already familiar with its functions. However, if you buy a new tech gadget, it is necessary to read the instructions before using it.

× I stored all my fruit snacks in it and it keeps the food fresh for a long time.

✓ I store all my fruit snacks in it and it keeps the food fresh for a long time.

这里时态应保持一致，描述习惯性动作时应使用一般现在时。原句中使用了过去时'stored'，与后面的现在时'keeps'不一致。建议将'stored'改为'store'。

× I also decorated with colorful fridge magnets which makes the kitchen look more level.

✓ I also decorate it with colorful fridge magnets which make the kitchen look more lively.

动词'decorated'缺少宾语，应加上'it'指代冰箱；'makes'应与复数主语'magnets'保持一致，改为'make'；'more level'表达不准确，应该用'more lively'表示更有生气。

× They are time saving and they help people do choices more efficiently.

✓ They are time-saving and they help people do chores more efficiently.

'time saving'应连写为'time-saving'作形容词；'do choices'表达错误，应为'do chores'表示做家务。

× When I sweep the floor I can always see cat cats hair, but when I sweep it with.

✓ When I sweep the floor I can always see cat hair, but when I sweep it with a vacuum cleaner, it's cleaner.

'cat cats hair'重复且错误，应为'cat hair'；句子不完整，补充完整表达。

× If you're using a smartphone, there's no need to read the instructions because you have already got 1 so you're familiar with the functions.

✓ If you're using a smartphone, there's no need to read the instructions because you have already got one so you're familiar with the functions.

数字'1'应写为单词'one'，且句子中应避免数字与文字混用。