Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınızda bəzi qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi problemləri var. Məsələn, "mission" əvəzinə "machine" istifadə edilməlidir və cümlələr daha təbii və axıcı olmalıdır. Daha dəqiq və əlaqəli ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələri daha qısa və aydın saxlayın.

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the vacuum cleaner because it helps me clean the house easily. I just set it up, and it cleans everywhere without much effort from me.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrdə söz seçimi və qrammatika səhvləri var, məsələn, "speaking machines" əvəzinə "sweeping machines" olmalıdır və "woman" əvəzinə "women" istifadə edilməlidir. Cümlələri daha aydın və qısa edin, həmçinin əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely think washing machines and sweeping machines are important, especially for women who work outside. Because they are often tired, these machines help them keep their homes clean.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrdə çoxlu "uh" və qeyri-rəsmi ifadələr var, bu da cavabın təbii və axıcı olmasına mane olur. Daha aydın və qısa cümlələr qurun və lazımsız sözlərdən çəkinin.

Ví dụ: Of course, I usually read the instructions when I buy a new machine. This helps me understand how to use it properly and avoid mistakes.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrdə qrammatik səhvlər və qarışıqlıq var. Məsələn, "if you won't prevent accidents" ifadəsi düzgün deyil. Cümlələri daha sadə və aydın qurun, əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions because it helps prevent accidents. Also, it allows you to use the machine more efficiently.

× My favorite mission is vacuum cleaner at home because it's so useful for me when I need clean the house it helps me out.

✓ My favorite machine is the vacuum cleaner at home because it's so useful for me when I need to clean the house; it helps me out.

The word 'mission' is incorrect and should be 'machine' (singular). Also, 'vacuum cleaner' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific item. Additionally, 'need clean' should be 'need to clean' to correctly use the infinitive form after 'need'.

× I just set it and it clean everywhere.

✓ I just set it and it cleans everywhere.

The verb 'clean' must agree with the third person singular subject 'it', so it should be 'cleans'.

× Yes, I definitely think that washing machines and speaking machines are necessary for people, especially for woman, because nowadays all women work at work and they go to their work, so they can't clean their home.

✓ Yes, I definitely think that washing machines and sweeping machines are necessary for people, especially for women, because nowadays all women work and they go to their work, so they can't clean their homes.

The word 'speaking' is incorrect and should be 'sweeping'. 'Woman' should be plural 'women' to match the context. Also, 'home' should be plural 'homes' to agree with plural subject 'they'.

× Yes, I definitely think that washing machines and speaking machines are necessary for people, especially for woman, because nowadays all women work at work and they go to their work, so they can't clean their home.

✓ Yes, I definitely think that washing machines and sweeping machines are necessary for people, especially for women, because nowadays all women work and they go to their work, so they can't clean their homes.

The phrase 'work at work' is redundant and incorrect; it should be just 'work'.

× Of course, it depends on the machines yeah, when I uh buy new machine, I definitely uh the instruction of it because uh, if I don't know how can I use it, I have to learn from the instruction of the machines.

✓ Of course, it depends on the machines. Yeah, when I buy a new machine, I definitely read the instructions because if I don't know how to use it, I have to learn from the instructions of the machine.

Missing verb 'read' after 'I definitely'. Also, 'how can I use it' should be 'how to use it' for correct indirect question structure. 'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions' to match context.

× Of course, it depends on the machines yeah, when I uh buy new machine, I definitely uh the instruction of it because uh, if I don't know how can I use it, I have to learn from the instruction of the machines.

✓ Of course, it depends on the machines. Yeah, when I buy a new machine, I definitely read the instructions because if I don't know how to use it, I have to learn from the instructions of the machine.

The phrase 'instruction of it' is awkward; 'instructions of the machine' or simply 'instructions' is better. Also, 'instruction of the machines' should be 'instructions of the machine' to be consistent.

× Yeah, I think that it is necessary to read the instructions if you won't prevent accidents and other things you have to read before you think it.

✓ Yeah, I think that it is necessary to read the instructions if you want to prevent accidents and other things; you have to read before you use it.

'won't' is incorrect here; it should be 'want' to express intention. Also, 'before you think it' is incorrect; it should be 'before you use it' or 'before you do it'.

× Yeah, I think that it is necessary to read the instructions if you won't prevent accidents and other things you have to read before you think it.

✓ Yeah, I think that it is necessary to read the instructions if you want to prevent accidents and other things; you have to read before you use it.

The phrase 'before you think it' is incorrect; the correct preposition and verb should be 'before you use it'.

× It helps you learning the instruction of it.

✓ It helps you learn the instructions.

'Helps you learning' is incorrect; after 'help' the base form of the verb 'learn' should be used. Also, 'instruction of it' is awkward; 'instructions' is better.

× Also it helps you use more efficiently.

✓ Also, it helps you use it more efficiently.

The sentence is missing the object pronoun 'it' after 'use' to clarify what is being used more efficiently.