Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about why you like the TV.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the TV in my room. I use it almost all day to watch movies and shows. It helps me relax after a long day. Moreover, I enjoy the variety of programmes available, which keeps me entertained.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and correct grammar, and avoid vague pronouns. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly and provide specific examples. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Ví dụ: Yes, washing and sweeping machines are very important in every household. Without them, tasks like washing clothes by hand would be very tiring and time-consuming for our mothers. Therefore, these machines make daily chores much easier and save a lot of effort.

Gợi ý: Improve your sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to explain when and why you read instructions. Keep your answer natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Usually, I don't read the instructions before using a machine. However, if the machine is complex, I do read the manual to understand how to operate it properly. This helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine safely.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by improving grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to explain the consequences clearly and provide specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read the instructions. If we don't, we might use the machines incorrectly and damage them quickly. This can cause problems and lead to costly repairs.

× There are so many things in my home which is my favorite but the my room TV is my most favorite thing which I used a whole day and I see so many movies on that and I enjoy to the watching the TV.

✓ There are so many things in my home which are my favorite but the TV in my room is my most favorite thing which I use the whole day and I watch so many movies on it and I enjoy watching TV.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'is' instead of 'are' to agree with the plural subject 'things'. Also, 'used' should be 'use' to match present tense, 'see' should be 'watch' for movies, and 'enjoy to the watching' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy watching'. The definite article 'the' before 'my room TV' is unnecessary and misplaced.

× There are so many things in my home which is my favorite but the my room TV is my most favorite thing which I used a whole day and I see so many movies on that and I enjoy to the watching the TV.

✓ There are so many things in my home which are my favorite but the TV in my room is my most favorite thing which I use the whole day and I watch so many movies on it and I enjoy watching TV.

The phrase 'the my room TV' incorrectly uses both 'the' and 'my' together. Only one determiner should be used. Correct form is 'the TV in my room' or 'my room's TV'.

× There are so many things in my home which is my favorite but the my room TV is my most favorite thing which I used a whole day and I see so many movies on that and I enjoy to the watching the TV.

✓ There are so many things in my home which are my favorite but the TV in my room is my most favorite thing which I use the whole day and I watch so many movies on it and I enjoy watching TV.

The verb 'used' is incorrectly in past tense; it should be present tense 'use' to match the context of habitual action.

× There are so many things in my home which is my favorite but the my room TV is my most favorite thing which I used a whole day and I see so many movies on that and I enjoy to the watching the TV.

✓ There are so many things in my home which are my favorite but the TV in my room is my most favorite thing which I use the whole day and I watch so many movies on it and I enjoy watching TV.

The phrase 'enjoy to the watching the TV' misuses prepositions. The correct form is 'enjoy watching TV' without 'to the'.

× Yes, these machines are most important things in our all of house because if these machines were not at our home, our mothers want to wash the clothes with the hand.

✓ Yes, these machines are the most important things in our whole house because if these machines were not at our home, our mothers would have to wash the clothes by hand.

The phrase 'our all of house' is incorrect; it should be 'our whole house'. Also, 'want to wash' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'would have to wash' to express necessity in the past conditional.

× Yes, these machines are most important things in our all of house because if these machines were not at our home, our mothers want to wash the clothes with the hand.

✓ Yes, these machines are the most important things in our whole house because if these machines were not at our home, our mothers would have to wash the clothes by hand.

The modal verb 'want to wash' is incorrectly used to express a hypothetical necessity. The correct modal verb phrase is 'would have to wash' to indicate obligation in a conditional sentence.

× He was very problem to them.

✓ It was very problematic for them.

The pronoun 'He' is incorrectly used to refer to a situation or thing; 'It' is correct. Also, 'very problem' is incorrect; 'very problematic' is the correct adjective form. 'To them' should be 'for them' to indicate who is affected.

× Usually I don't see the instructions, but sometimes there was a complex machine when I see the instructions of this.

✓ Usually I don't read the instructions, but sometimes when there is a complex machine, I read the instructions for it.

The sentence incorrectly mixes past and present tenses. 'There was' should be 'there is' to match habitual present tense. 'See the instructions' is better expressed as 'read the instructions'. The phrase 'instructions of this' is awkward; 'instructions for it' is better.

× Usually I don't see the instructions, but sometimes there was a complex machine when I see the instructions of this.

✓ Usually I don't read the instructions, but sometimes when there is a complex machine, I read the instructions for it.

The preposition 'of' in 'instructions of this' is incorrect; 'instructions for it' is the correct form.

× Yes, it is important to read instructions because when we don't read the instructions we damage the machines quickly and it is problem for us.

✓ Yes, it is important to read instructions because when we don't read the instructions, we damage the machines quickly and it is a problem for us.

The phrase 'it is problem' is missing an article; it should be 'it is a problem'. Also, a comma is needed after 'instructions' to separate clauses properly.