Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý chính rõ ràng, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'beneficial like the washing machine' không phù hợp, và câu trả lời hơi dài dòng, cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time and effort. Instead of washing clothes by hand, I just load them in, press a few buttons, and it does all the work. I honestly can't imagine living without it.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không chính xác và câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết ý, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important in modern households because they make daily chores easier and more efficient. For instance, washing machines clean clothes thoroughly and save water compared to washing by hand. Similarly, robotic sweeping machines help keep the floor clean without much effort.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ 'applicant' thay vì 'appliance'. Bạn nên sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't always read the instructions because many machines look simple and user-friendly. I usually try to figure them out myself. However, for more complicated devices like new kitchen appliances or printers, I prefer to read the manual carefully to avoid damaging them. It depends on how confident I feel about using the machine.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, câu không mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết ý, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading the instructions is important because it helps users operate machines correctly and safely. It also prevents unnecessary damage. Moreover, many machines have special functions that people might miss if they don't read the manual. Although it may seem time-consuming, reading instructions is a very practical habit.

× it save me half amount of time and energy because I don't have to wash clothes by hand.

✓ it saves me half the amount of time and energy because I don't have to wash clothes by hand.

The verb 'save' should be in the third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'half amount' should be 'half the amount' for correct quantifier usage.

× the machine are censoring modern household because they make daily calls much easier and more efficient.

✓ the machines are essential in modern households because they make daily chores much easier and more efficient.

The subject 'machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. 'Censoring' is incorrect; likely intended 'essential'. 'Household' should be plural 'households' to match context. 'Calls' should be 'chores'.

× washing machine not only clean thoroughly but also save water compared to national hand washing.

✓ washing machines not only clean thoroughly but also save water compared to manual hand washing.

Subject 'washing machine' should be plural 'washing machines' to agree with plural verbs 'clean' and 'save'. 'National' is incorrect; likely intended 'manual'.

× Meanwhile sweeping machine absolutely robotic, one can keep the floss by leg without any fault.

✓ Meanwhile, sweeping machines are absolutely robotic; one can keep the floors clean without any fault.

Missing verb 'are' after 'sweeping machines'. 'Floss by leg' is incorrect; likely intended 'floors clean'. Punctuation improved for clarity.

× They allow people to come and go or lesson rather than how work.

✓ They allow people to come and go or relax rather than do hard work.

'Lesson' is incorrect; likely intended 'relax'. 'How work' is incorrect; should be 'do hard work' or similar.

× I don't feel like really read the manual to avoid damaging it.

✓ I don't feel like really reading the manual to avoid damaging it.

After 'feel like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form 'reading'.

× I think it's depends on how confident I feel about using the machine.

✓ I think it depends on how confident I feel about using the machine.

'It's' (it is) is incorrect here; the correct form is 'it depends' without contraction.

× Reading the instruction is casual because it helps user operate the machine correctly and safely.

✓ Reading the instructions is crucial because it helps users operate the machine correctly and safely.

'Instruction' should be plural 'instructions'. 'Casual' is incorrect; likely intended 'crucial'. 'User' should be plural 'users'.

× It also prevents a shouldn't or unnecessary damage.

✓ It also prevents accidental or unnecessary damage.

'A shouldn't' is incorrect; likely intended 'accidental'. 'Damage' is uncountable and does not need an article.

× Besides, many machine has special function that people might miss.

✓ Besides, many machines have special functions that people might miss.

'Machine' should be plural 'machines' to agree with 'many'. 'Has' should be 'have'. 'Function' should be plural 'functions'.

× They don't they make manual serving thought is seem a bit time consuming is actually a very practical habit.

✓ Though it may seem a bit time-consuming, reading the manual is actually a very practical habit.

Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Corrected to convey intended meaning clearly.