Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了理由，但句子结构稍显简单，且部分表达不够自然，例如“softwares”应为“software”，且可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议加强句子多样性和连接词的使用。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the computer because, unlike cell phones, it has a larger screen which makes watching movies or animations much more enjoyable. Moreover, there are many software programs that are only compatible with computers, enhancing their usefulness.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够清晰的问题，如“consume”应为“consumes”，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意主谓一致，简化句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, both washing machines and sweeping machines are very important. For example, when I was at university without a washing machine, I had to wash all my clothes by hand, which took much more time. Additionally, sweeping machines significantly reduce the time needed to clean the floor.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“use in instructions”应为“use instructions”。建议注意介词使用和句子连贯性，提升表达准确性。

Ví dụ: I sometimes read the instructions before using a machine. For simple machines like washing machines and sweeping machines, which are easy to use, I usually ask my parents for help instead of reading the instructions. However, for complex machines like the HPLC machine, I always read the instructions carefully.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，但表达略显简单，且“in order not to break it”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并丰富句子结构。

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the situation. For simple machines, it might be quicker to try using them directly and learn through experience. However, for complex machines, reading the instructions is essential to avoid damaging them.

× The computer is my favorite machine in my home because compared to cell phones they have larger screens which is more convenient to watch movies or animations.

✓ The computer is my favorite machine in my home because compared to cell phones it has a larger screen which is more convenient to watch movies or animations.

这里的主语是单数的“computer”，所以后面指代它的代词应该用单数“it”，而不是复数“they”。此外，“screens”应改为单数“screen”，以保持一致。

× Also, there are many softwares that can only be used in the computer.

✓ Also, there is much software that can only be used on the computer.

“software”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式“softwares”。此外，习惯用法中应说“on the computer”而不是“in the computer”。

× As for the washing machine in the university where the washing machine is ready, I need to wash all my clothes by hand and this consume much more time than using a washing machine.

✓ As for the washing machine in the university where the washing machine is ready, I need to wash all my clothes by hand and this consumes much more time than using a washing machine.

主语“this”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“consumes”。

× Also, sweeping machine greatly reduce your time and sweeping the floor.

✓ Also, the sweeping machine greatly reduces your time in sweeping the floor.

“sweeping machine”前应加定冠词“the”，且谓语动词应与主语一致，使用第三人称单数“reduces”。另外，表达更自然应为“reduces your time in sweeping the floor”。

× I sometimes read instructions before using a machine. For some machines like washing machine and sweeping machine that are easy to use and I can ask my parents how to use it, so I seldom use in instructions.

✓ I sometimes read instructions before using a machine. For some machines like the washing machine and the sweeping machine that are easy to use and I can ask my parents how to use them, so I seldom use instructions.

“washing machine”和“sweeping machine”前应加定冠词“the”。“how to use it”中的“it”应改为复数“them”，因为前面提到了多个机器。短语“use in instructions”不正确，应改为“use instructions”。

× But for some large and sophisticated machines like the HPLC machine, I need to read the instructions.

✓ But for some large and sophisticated machines like the HPLC machine, I need to read the instructions.

该句无明显语法错误，保持不变。

× It depends on the situation. For some simple machines, it can be faster to use it directly and discover how to use the machine.

✓ It depends on the situation. For some simple machines, it can be faster to use them directly and discover how to use the machine.

“some simple machines”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。

× However, for some complex machines, you need to read the instructions in order not to break it.

✓ However, for some complex machines, you need to read the instructions in order not to break them.

“some complex machines”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。