Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
In my family, my favorite machine, uh, mushrooms are washing and uh, uh, clean machine because they help me to do many housework. Then I can have enough time to focus on the things which I'm.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think they are very important because if I haven't the washing machine, I should clean the clothes by hand. This need a lot of time, then I will have enough time to work and take care of my son.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
Yes, every time when I use a new machine, I usually read the instructions because I think the instruments are very important. After I reading them, I know how to operate the machine. At the same time I it help me avoid the dangerous.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
Yes, because the instructions will tell you how to operate the machine. At the same time it also tell you the important important things. When you operate the machines you should notice and the last thing is how to keep the machine running.
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Part 1
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“mushrooms are washing and clean machine”不符合语境，且回答中有重复和犹豫词汇。建议简洁明了地表达，避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the washing machine because it helps me clean clothes quickly, saving me a lot of time for other activities.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“if I haven't the washing machine”应为“if I didn't have a washing machine”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意时态和语法的正确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because without them, I would have to do all the cleaning by hand, which takes a lot of time and energy. Therefore, these machines help me manage my work and family better.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“After I reading them”应为“After reading them”，且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更准确流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions when I use a new machine because it helps me understand how to operate it safely and avoid any accidents.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“important important”，且句子不完整，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且逻辑更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, reading the instructions is important because they explain how to use the machine properly, highlight safety precautions, and provide tips on maintenance to keep the machine running well.
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