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Part 1

Giám khảo

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Thí sinh

My favorite machine in my home is printer UH. Because I'm student, I have a lot of UH notes, so I print there is a convenient and quickly UH.

Giám khảo

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Thí sinh

I think they are equal in person because I'm lazy. I don't like do any housework they can washing machine and sweep machine can help me do homework. I I think they are equally don't compare.

Giám khảo

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Thí sinh

I seldom read the instruction before I use a machine. I usually use machine busy on my experience, but sometimes. Is unless I can look.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think read instruction is important, especially uh the machine is new or look complex. I will take some time to read instruction clearly to wait mistaken uh, let's help me use machine more fastly and efficiently.

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Part 1

What is your favourite machine in your home?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,存在语法错误和重复词汇,建议简化句子结构,避免口头语“UH”,并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the printer because I am a student and often need to print my notes. It is very convenient and saves me a lot of time.

Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,语法错误较多,句子结构混乱,建议使用简单句表达观点,避免重复,并正确使用连接词。

Ví dụ: I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important because they help me with housework. Since I don't like doing chores, these machines make my life easier.

Do you read the instructions before using a machine?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多,表达不流畅,建议使用完整句子,清晰表达频率和原因。

Ví dụ: I seldom read the instructions before using a machine because I usually rely on my experience. However, if the machine is new or complicated, I will read the instructions.

Do you think it is important to read the instructions?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和口头语,表达不够流畅,建议使用正确的语法和词汇,避免重复,表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is important to read instructions, especially when the machine is new or looks complicated. Reading instructions helps me avoid mistakes and use the machine more efficiently.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× My favorite machine in my home is printer UH.

My favorite machine in my home is the printer.

这里缺少冠词“the”,因为特指家里的打印机。冠词错误属于单复数问题中的一部分,正确使用冠词可以明确名词的单复数和特指关系。

Sentence structure errors

× Because I'm student, I have a lot of UH notes, so I print there is a convenient and quickly UH.

Because I'm a student, I have a lot of notes, so printing is convenient and quick.

句子结构混乱,缺少冠词“a”,动词形式错误,形容词和副词使用不当。需要调整句子结构,使其通顺且语法正确。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think they are equal in person because I'm lazy.

I think they are equal in importance because I'm lazy.

“equal in person”表达不正确,应为“equal in importance”表示“同等重要”。这里是词语搭配错误,属于代词和词语使用错误。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I don't like do any housework they can washing machine and sweep machine can help me do homework.

I don't like doing any housework; the washing machine and sweeping machine can help me do it.

动词后应使用动名词形式“doing”,且句子缺少连接词和代词,导致表达不清楚。需要正确使用代词和连接词。

Singular and plural issue

× I I think they are equally don't compare.

I think they are equal; I don't compare them.

“equally”用作副词不合适,应使用形容词“equal”,且句子结构不完整,需分开表达。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I seldom read the instruction before I use a machine.

I seldom read the instructions before I use a machine.

“instruction”应为复数形式“instructions”,因为通常说明书包含多条指令。量词使用错误。

Sentence structure errors

× I usually use machine busy on my experience, but sometimes.

I usually use the machine based on my experience, but sometimes I don't.

句子结构混乱,缺少冠词和谓语,表达不完整。需要调整句子结构使其完整通顺。

Incorrect use of conjunction

× Is unless I can look.

I only look at the instructions if necessary.

“Is unless”用法错误,应使用正确的条件连词“if”或“only if”。连接词使用错误。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think read instruction is important, especially uh the machine is new or look complex.

Yes, I think reading instructions is important, especially when the machine is new or looks complex.

缺少动名词形式“reading”,且“look complex”应为“looks complex”,主谓不一致。代词和动词形式错误。

Incorrect adverb placement

× I will take some time to read instruction clearly to wait mistaken uh, let's help me use machine more fastly and efficiently.

I will take some time to read the instructions carefully to avoid mistakes; this helps me use the machine more quickly and efficiently.

副词位置错误,“clearly”应为“carefully”,且“fastly”不是正确副词,应为“quickly”。句子结构也需调整。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BusyOccupied; Unavailable; Hectic
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LazyIdle
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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