Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and provides good reasons, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is definitely the washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort. It not only washes but also dries my clothes, which is very convenient. I dislike doing laundry by hand as it makes my hands rough and tired.

Gợi ý: Your answer is on topic but contains many fillers like 'uh' which affect fluency. Also, watch subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe washing machines and sweeping machines are essential parts of our homes because they save a lot of energy and time. Moreover, they help keep our clothes and homes clean efficiently.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but filled with unnecessary fillers like 'uh'. Also, use correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Try to make your answer more concise and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Whenever I purchase a new machine and after installation, I always read all the instructions before the first use because it makes operating the machine easy and convenient.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear pronouns which affect clarity. Avoid fillers and ensure pronouns clearly refer to the right nouns. Also, use correct sentence structure and grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe reading the instructions before using any new machine is very important because without proper instructions, users can hurt themselves and may damage the machine.

× Weight machine at home is definitely my washing machine because it saves lot of time and effort.

✓ The weight machine at home is definitely my washing machine because it saves a lot of time and effort.

The sentence misses the definite article 'The' before 'weight machine' and the quantifier 'a' before 'lot of time'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Also, 'a lot of' is the correct quantifier for expressing a large amount.

× It saves lot of time and effort.

✓ It saves a lot of time and effort.

The phrase 'lot of' requires an article 'a' before it to be grammatically correct. So, it should be 'a lot of' to indicate a large amount.

× It not only washes but also dries my clothes which is very convenient since I dislike doing laundry by hand as it makes my hand rough and tired.

✓ It not only washes but also dries my clothes, which is very convenient since I dislike doing laundry by hand as it makes my hands rough and tired.

The word 'hand' should be plural 'hands' because generally both hands get rough and tired when doing laundry by hand. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the relative clause.

× Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are essential part of our, uh, home, uh, because uh, they saves lot of energy and uh, time and also, uh, makes our clothes and home clean, uh.

✓ Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are an essential part of our home because they save a lot of energy and time and also make our clothes and home clean.

The subject 'they' is plural, so the verbs should be 'save' and 'make' instead of 'saves' and 'makes'. Also, 'essential part' needs the article 'an' before it. The phrase 'a lot of' requires the article 'a'.

× Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are essential part of our, uh, home, uh, because uh, they saves lot of energy and uh, time and also, uh, makes our clothes and home clean, uh.

✓ Yes, I believe that washing machines and sweeping machines are an essential part of our home because they save a lot of energy and time and also make our clothes and home clean.

The phrase 'part of our home' is correct, but the original sentence had unnecessary commas and fillers that interrupt the flow. Removing fillers and unnecessary commas improves clarity.

× Uh, yes, definitely uh, whenever I purchase a new machine uh, and after installation, uh, before the 1st use, I particularly read all the instructions because it uh, make the use of the machine very easy and convenient.

✓ Uh, yes, definitely, whenever I purchase a new machine and after installation, before the first use, I particularly read all the instructions because it makes the use of the machine very easy and convenient.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal speech. Removing unnecessary fillers improves sentence clarity.

× because it uh, make the use of the machine very easy and convenient.

✓ because it makes the use of the machine very easy and convenient.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I believe that reading the instructions uh, before using any new machine is uh, very essential, because without uh, uh, reading proper uh, instructions, I we can hurt them uh, themselves and can damage machine also.

✓ Yes, I believe that reading the instructions before using any new machine is very essential because without reading proper instructions, we can hurt ourselves and can also damage the machine.

The pronouns 'I we' are incorrect; it should be 'we'. Also, 'them themselves' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' is appropriate here. Additionally, 'damage machine' needs the definite article 'the' before 'machine'. Removing fillers improves clarity.