Part 1
Giám khảo
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Thí sinh
My favorite machine at home is washing machine. It saves me a lot of time, especially since I have busy studies. It's reliable and helps keep my clothes clean without much health.
Giám khảo
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine is are important. They save a lot of time and effort compared to do not by hand. They help keep things clean and let people do another things or spend time with family.
Giám khảo
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine. I want to make sure I'm using it the right way and not breaking it. It also good to know what do if something goes wrong.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think a reading instructions is important because they help you understand how to use something. Probably it can stop you from making mistakes and save you time in the end.
What is your favourite machine in your home?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达存在一些错误,且用词不够准确。建议注意冠词的使用(如the washing machine),避免表达不清("without much health"不明确),并丰富细节,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the washing machine because it saves me a lot of time, especially since I have a busy study schedule. It is very reliable and helps keep my clothes clean efficiently.
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,如主谓不一致和词汇使用不当。建议注意语法结构,使用恰当的连接词,并提供更具体的例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they save a lot of time and effort compared to cleaning by hand. This allows people to focus on other tasks or spend more quality time with their families.
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但存在语法错误(如缺少be动词)和表达不够完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性,同时可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually read the instructions before using a machine because I want to make sure I am using it correctly and avoid damaging it. It is also helpful to know what to do if something goes wrong.
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如冠词使用错误和词汇搭配不当。建议注意语法和词汇的准确使用,并尝试使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think reading instructions is important because they help you understand how to use a device properly. This can prevent mistakes and ultimately save you time.
× My favorite machine at home is washing machine.
✓ My favorite machine at home is the washing machine.
此处缺少定冠词“the”,因为特指家中的洗衣机,英语中单数可数名词前需要冠词。
× It's reliable and helps keep my clothes clean without much health.
✓ It's reliable and helps keep my clothes clean without much effort.
原句中“without much health”用词不当,应为“without much effort”,表示“没有太多努力”。
× Yes, I think washing machine and sweeping machine is are important.
✓ Yes, I think washing machines and sweeping machines are important.
主语为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”,且名词应使用复数形式。
× They save a lot of time and effort compared to do not by hand.
✓ They save a lot of time and effort compared to doing it by hand.
“compared to”后应接动名词形式,且表达完整,故改为“doing it by hand”。
× They help keep things clean and let people do another things or spend time with family.
✓ They help keep things clean and let people do other things or spend time with family.
“another things”错误,应为“other things”,表示“其他的事情”。
× It also good to know what do if something goes wrong.
✓ It is also good to know what to do if something goes wrong.
缺少系动词“is”,且“what do”应为“what to do”,表示“该做什么”。
× Yes, I think a reading instructions is important because they help you understand how to use something.
✓ Yes, I think reading instructions is important because they help you understand how to use something.
“reading instructions”作为不可数名词短语,不需要冠词“a”。