Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“It's can help me”应改为“It can help me”。建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，避免重复表达“a lot”。

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the dishwasher because it saves me a lot of time, especially after dinner. It allows me to relax instead of doing the dishes by hand.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但存在单复数不一致问题，如“it can also avoid”应为“they can also avoid”。建议注意主谓一致，并使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. These machines are essential in our daily life because they save time and free our hands from housework. Moreover, they can help avoid arguments among family members by sharing chores.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误，如“instructions is”应为“instructions are”，“before we using”应为“before we use”，以及“the always tell us”不完整。建议加强语法基础，注意冠词和动词形式。

Ví dụ: Of course, reading instructions is necessary before using a machine. For example, they always provide details on how to use the machine more efficiently and correctly.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够自然，如“we can know the things better and more clear”应改为“we can understand things better and more clearly”。建议注意形容词和副词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: As far as I'm concerned, reading instructions is necessary because it helps us avoid mistakes. With instructions, we can understand things better and more clearly.

× It's can help me to relax myself instead of doing the housework.

✓ It can help me to relax myself instead of doing the housework.

The auxiliary 'It's' (it is) is incorrectly used before 'can'. Modal verbs like 'can' should directly follow the subject without 'is'. The correct form is 'It can help...'. This error is about incorrect verb form usage.

× More importantly, it can also avoid the argument between the family members.

✓ More importantly, they can also avoid arguments between family members.

The subject 'These machines' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Also, 'argument' should be plural 'arguments' to match the general meaning. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× instructions is necessary for us before we using the machine.

✓ instructions are necessary for us before we use the machine.

The noun 'instructions' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'we using' is incorrect; it should be 'we use'. This error involves singular/plural agreement and verb form.

× instructions is necessary for us before we using the machine.

✓ instructions are necessary for us before we use the machine.

The phrase 'we using' is incorrect; after 'before' a subject and base verb should be used, so 'we use' is correct. This is a verb form error involving the present participle.

× For example, the always tell us some details on how to use this machine more efficiently and correctly.

✓ For example, they always tell us some details on how to use this machine more efficiently and correctly.

The pronoun 'the' is incorrect here; it should be 'they' referring to 'instructions'. This is a sentence structure and pronoun usage error.

× With the help of the instructions, we can know the things better and more clear.

✓ With the help of the instructions, we can understand things better and more clearly.

'Know' is not typically used with 'better' and 'more clear'. 'Understand' fits better. Also, 'more clear' should be the adverb 'more clearly' to modify the verb. This is an adjective/adverb usage error.