Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや表現の不自然さがあります。例えば、"smartphones"は複数形ですが、"My favorite machine"は単数形なので一致させる必要があります。また、"searching my favorite things"は不明瞭なので、具体的に何を検索するのか説明すると良いでしょう。さらに、"This makes me relieve stress"は"This helps me relieve stress"の方が自然です。

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is my smartphone because I can watch dramas, play games, and search for information I like. These activities help me relieve stress after a long day.

Gợi ý: 回答は長くて複雑すぎ、文法的な誤りも多いです。意味が伝わりにくい部分があり、冗長な表現を避けて簡潔に答えることが必要です。また、"that because"は不自然で、"because"だけで十分です。文を分けて、論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

Ví dụ: I think washing machines are not very important for me because I usually wash clothes by hand. However, sweeping machines are important since they help me clean the house more easily.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と表現に改善の余地があります。例えば、"I'm not good at using machine"は"I'm not good at using machines"が正しいです。また、"what is dangerous of before I use a machine"は不自然なので、"what dangers to avoid before using a machine"などにすると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions carefully because I'm not good at using machines. I check how to use them properly and what dangers to avoid before I start.

Gợi ý: 回答は内容的に良いですが、文法と表現をより自然にする必要があります。例えば、"it is written many important things"は"many important things are written"に直すと自然です。また、"read carefully about it"は"read it carefully"が適切です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important because many important safety instructions are written in the manual. Therefore, we have to read it carefully to avoid any dangerous problems.

× My favorite machine in my home is smartphones.

✓ My favorite machines in my home are smartphones.

The subject 'machine' is singular, but 'smartphones' is plural. To maintain agreement, both should be plural or singular. Since 'smartphones' is plural, 'machine' should be pluralized to 'machines'.

× This makes me relieve stress.

✓ This helps me relieve stress.

The verb 'makes' is not typically used with 'relieve stress'. The correct verb is 'helps' to indicate assistance in relieving stress.

× I think washing machine is not so important, but sweeping machines are important that because we don't have to use washing machine because we only have to wash by my hands, but we have to use sweeping machine when I clean my home.

✓ I think washing machines are not so important, but sweeping machines are important because we don't have to use washing machines since we only wash by hand, but we have to use sweeping machines when I clean my home.

The singular 'washing machine' is used inconsistently with plural 'sweeping machines'. Also, 'washing machine' should be pluralized to 'washing machines' to match the context. The phrase 'wash by my hands' is corrected to 'wash by hand' for natural expression.

× So I really checked how to use or what is dangerous of before I use a machine.

✓ So I really check how to use it and what is dangerous before I use a machine.

The phrase 'what is dangerous of' is incorrect; it should be 'what is dangerous'. Also, 'checked' is changed to 'check' to maintain present tense consistency. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× That's because it is written many important things to avoid dangerous problems, so we have to read carefully about it.

✓ That's because many important things are written to avoid dangerous problems, so we have to read carefully.

The phrase 'it is written many important things' is incorrect; the passive voice 'many important things are written' is appropriate. Also, 'read carefully about it' is unnatural; 'read carefully' suffices.