Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to avoid repetition and filler words like 'my my' and 'uh'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and add more specific details about why the dishwasher is your favorite.

Ví dụ: My favorite machine at home is the dishwasher because it cleans my dishes thoroughly and saves me a lot of time. Consequently, I can focus on other important tasks, such as cooking or cleaning the house.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating words like 'definitely' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples of how these machines help you.

Ví dụ: Yes, washing machines and sweeping machines are very important because they clean clothes and floors efficiently. As a result, I save time and can focus on other household chores or relax.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and avoid awkward phrasing like 'I renew the machine'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a machine because it helps me understand how to operate it correctly. This way, I avoid making mistakes that could damage the machine.

Gợi ý: Try to use plural form 'instructions' and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer explanations.

Ví dụ: Yes, reading the instructions is important because it allows you to operate the machine efficiently and avoid mistakes. Otherwise, incorrect use might cause problems or damage the machine.

× Definitely the washing machine and the cleaning machine at home is definitely a help.

✓ Definitely the washing machine and the cleaning machine at home are definitely a help.

The subject consists of two singular nouns joined by 'and', which makes it plural. Therefore, the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree with the plural subject.

× It is important to read the instruction so you can efficiently operate it without making any mistakes and ruin the machine.

✓ It is important to read the instructions so you can efficiently operate it without making any mistakes and ruin the machine.

The word 'instruction' in this context should be plural 'instructions' because it refers to multiple guidelines or steps. Using the plural form is more natural and grammatically correct here.