Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about why you like the drone. For example, explain what makes the pictures beautiful or how it helps you enjoy your travels.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the drone I bought two years ago. I use it to take aerial photos when I travel, which capture beautiful views from above. These pictures help me remember my trips and I often share them on Instagram.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more structured and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details using linking words. Also, correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'sweeping machine' instead of 'swiping machine').

Ví dụ: Yes, I think both washing machines and sweeping machines are important. Washing machines help me keep my clothes clean and fresh, which makes me feel comfortable. Additionally, sweeping machines save time and keep the floors tidy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to speak more fluently and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use correct pronouns.

Ví dụ: I usually don't read the instructions before using a machine. Instead, I watch YouTube tutorials because they provide visual explanations, which help me understand how to use the machine more easily than reading paper instructions.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more concise. Avoid repetition and improve grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide specific benefits of reading instructions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe reading instructions is important because it helps us use machines more effectively and avoid mistakes. By understanding how to operate them properly, we can prevent damage and work more productively.

× I like drawn that I bought 2 years ago, which is really uh helpful to enjoy my trouble.

✓ I like the drone that I bought 2 years ago, which is really helpful to enjoy my trouble.

The word 'drawn' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'drone'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it clarifies the sentence meaning.

× When I go to traveling, I use drone to take pictures from the air and which is really beautiful pictures, and I was like I post Instagram.

✓ When I go traveling, I use the drone to take pictures from the air, which are really beautiful pictures, and I like to post them on Instagram.

The phrase 'go to traveling' is incorrect; it should be 'go traveling' (verb + gerund). Also, 'use drone' needs an article 'the drone'. 'Which is really beautiful pictures' is incorrect because 'pictures' is plural, so 'which are really beautiful pictures' is correct. 'I was like I post Instagram' is unclear; corrected to 'I like to post them on Instagram' for clarity and grammar.

× Washing machine is really important because I like to wear the beautiful clean, a clean beautiful clothes that makes me really refreshed and also a swiping machine is also important.

✓ The washing machine is really important because I like to wear beautiful, clean clothes that make me feel really refreshed, and also a sweeping machine is important.

'Washing machine' needs the definite article 'the'. 'A clean beautiful clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. The adjective order is corrected to 'beautiful, clean clothes'. 'That makes me' should be 'that make me' to agree with plural 'clothes'. 'Swiping machine' is a mispronunciation or typo; corrected to 'sweeping machine'.

× I don't often read, uh, instructions before you use, but instead of reading instructions, I watched some YouTube, YouTube instructions, uh, which really helpful to, uh, use easily because it, uh, can I can understand visually.

✓ I don't often read instructions before I use a machine, but instead of reading instructions, I watch some YouTube videos, which are really helpful to use easily because I can understand visually.

'Before you use' should be 'before I use' to maintain first person perspective. 'I watched' should be present tense 'I watch' to match habitual action. 'YouTube instructions' is better expressed as 'YouTube videos'. 'Which really helpful' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct. 'Can I can understand' is redundant; corrected to 'I can understand'.

× I think it's really important to read the instructions because reading instructions makes us to make us use machines more easily and effective, effectively, productively, and also as well.

✓ I think it's really important to read the instructions because reading instructions helps us use machines more easily, effectively, and productively.

'Makes us to make us use' is incorrect; it should be 'helps us use' or 'makes us use'. The adverbs 'easily', 'effectively', and 'productively' are better used without repetition or unnecessary conjunctions like 'and also as well'.

× And with that, instructions we misuse, uh, misuse machines more, uh, bad way for bad ways.

✓ Without instructions, we misuse machines in bad ways.

The phrase 'with that, instructions' is awkward and incorrect; 'without instructions' is clearer. 'Misuse machines more bad way for bad ways' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'misuse machines in bad ways' for clarity and correctness.