Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrases that affect naturalness and clarity. For example, "training them for watching TV shows" is unclear and likely a mistake. Also, the last sentence is incomplete and unclear. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct grammar to improve naturalness and effectiveness.

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is my computer because it serves many purposes. I use it to search for information for my studies, and I also enjoy watching TV shows on it to relax. It's a versatile device that helps me both work and entertain myself.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, with good use of linking words like "additionally." However, some phrases are awkward, such as "people live in a life of fast-paced." Try to use more natural expressions and vary your vocabulary to improve fluency and coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing machines and vacuum cleaners are very important because people nowadays have busy lives and little time for housework. These machines are convenient and efficient, helping save a lot of time. Moreover, by spending less time cleaning, people can relax or focus on other activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and confusing phrases, such as "I will send them at least one time" and "rely on my conversations." Try to organize your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary and grammar to express your habits regarding reading instructions.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always read the instructions before using a new machine. Usually, I read them once to understand the basic functions and safety warnings. For simple appliances, I might rely on my experience and only check the manual if something doesn't work.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical mistakes and awkward phrases, such as "enforcement guidelines," "ensure it works efficiency," and "reading the instructions process your products." Try to use clearer and more accurate vocabulary and sentence structures to improve clarity and naturalness.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is very important to read the instructions because they provide important guidelines and safety precautions. For example, understanding how to use a device properly can help avoid accidents and ensure it works efficiently. Therefore, reading the instructions helps you use products more safely and effectively.

× Not only do I use it to search for some information for my study, but I also enjoy relaxing by training them for watching TV shows on it.

✓ Not only do I use it to search for some information for my study, but I also enjoy relaxing by watching TV shows on it.

The phrase 'relaxing by training them for watching TV shows' is incorrect because 'training them for watching' is not a proper verb + -ing form usage here. The correct expression is 'relaxing by watching TV shows' to indicate the activity used for relaxation.

× Not only do I use it to search for some information for my study, but I also enjoy relaxing by training them for watching TV shows on it.

✓ Not only do I use it to search for some information for my study, but I also enjoy relaxing by watching TV shows on it.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrectly used here as it does not refer to any plural noun previously mentioned. It should be omitted to maintain clarity and correctness.

× It's a versatile device that helps me both work and online.

✓ It's a versatile device that helps me both work and be online.

The sentence lacks parallel structure. 'Helps me both work and online' is incomplete because 'online' is an adverb and needs a verb to parallel 'work'. Adding 'be' before 'online' corrects the structure.

× Yes, I believe they are important because nowadays people live in a life of fast-paced and they often don't have enough time to do housework by themselves.

✓ Yes, I believe they are important because nowadays people live a fast-paced life and they often don't have enough time to do housework by themselves.

The phrase 'live in a life of fast-paced' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'live a fast-paced life' without 'in' or 'of'.

× Most of the time I will send them at least one time to know the basic functions and the safety warnings with simple house appliances and might only rely on my conversations and only check the manual if something doesn't work.

✓ Most of the time I will read them at least once to know the basic functions and the safety warnings with simple household appliances and might only rely on my experience and only check the manual if something doesn't work.

The verb 'send' is incorrect here; it should be 'read' when referring to instructions. Also, 'conversations' is incorrect in this context; 'experience' fits better. 'House appliances' should be 'household appliances'.

× For example, by understanding how to use the device properly, they can avoid accidents and ensure it works efficiency.

✓ For example, by understanding how to use the device properly, they can avoid accidents and ensure it works efficiently.

The adverb 'efficiently' should be used instead of the adjective 'efficiency' to modify the verb 'works'.

× Therefore, reading the instructions process your products more safely and efficiently.

✓ Therefore, reading the instructions helps you use your products more safely and efficiently.

The original sentence lacks a proper verb and subject agreement. 'Reading the instructions process your products' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the subject and verb and adds 'use' to complete the meaning.