Machine— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitations and tighten the response to be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating similar ideas ("chat" twice) and filler sounds like "uh" and "umm."

Ví dụ: My favourite machine at home is the coffee machine because my family and I drink coffee every morning. For example, we gather around it each day to share plans and brainstorm ideas before work, which helps us feel connected.

Gợi ý: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and coherent supporting reasons. Use linking words ("because," "therefore," "as a result") correctly and avoid unfinished sentences. Provide specific examples of benefits (time-saving, cleanliness, health) and remove excessive fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think washing and sweeping machines are very important because they save time and improve hygiene. For instance, washing machines remove dirt and bacteria more effectively than hand washing, and vacuum cleaners reduce dust, which helps prevent allergies.

Gợi ý: Give a slightly fuller but concise explanation and include a linking phrase to show reasoning. Reduce absolute statements and filler words. You could mention situations when you would read instructions to show balance.

Ví dụ: I usually don't read instructions and prefer to learn by trial and error because I find it faster. However, if a device looks complicated or dangerous, I will read the manual first to avoid mistakes.

Gợi ý: Remove hesitations and make the structure clearer: one topic sentence plus two specific reasons with linking words. Use precise vocabulary ("prevent damage," "ensure safety") and avoid vague phrases like "the one."

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Reading instructions helps users avoid mistakes and ensures safety; for example, it can prevent damage to the device and reduce the risk of injuries from incorrect operation.

× I'm really fond of coffee and my family are too.

✓ I'm really fond of coffee and my family is too.

Use singular verb with collective noun 'family' when treated as a single unit in American English; this is a subject-verb agreement/pronoun-number consistency issue. Change 'are' to 'is' to match singular collective noun. Alternatively, keep 'are' if emphasizing individuals, but given context 'my family' acting as one unit, use 'is'.

× we use it every morning, umm, it brings us together for a short chat before the day starts so we can come up with new ideas and chat with each other.

✓ We use it every morning; it brings us together for a short chat before the day starts, so we can come up with new ideas and talk to each other.

Verb choice: 'chat with each other' is acceptable, but 'talk to each other' is more natural here. Also capitalize start and add punctuation for clarity. Maintain present simple tense for habitual actions. Replace redundant 'chat with each other' with 'talk to each other' for conciseness.

× in the past people used to wash everything by their hand, therefore they had disease and they couldn't umm meet with their family umm so often as people do nowadays.

✓ In the past people used to wash everything by hand; therefore they got diseases and couldn't meet with their family as often as people do nowadays.

Several issues: 'by their hand' is incorrect preposition/phrase; use 'by hand'. 'Had disease' is unnatural—use plural 'got diseases' or 'suffered from diseases'. Tense consistency: past simple 'got' fits. Remove extra filler words and fix word order 'as often as people do nowadays.'

× Moreover, umm now people can be more healthy because they.

✓ Moreover, now people can be healthier because of that.

Original sentence is incomplete ('because they.' has no verb or object). Use comparative adjective 'healthier' and add 'because of that' to complete the clause. This fixes sentence fragment and adjective use.

× I prefer making a trial run and learn by my errors instead of reading an instruction and be confused.

✓ I prefer making a trial run and learning from my mistakes instead of reading an instruction and becoming confused.

Maintain parallel structure after 'prefer': use gerunds 'making' and 'learning'. Use 'learning from my mistakes' (natural phrase) and 'becoming confused' as gerund to match parallelism. Replace 'be confused' with 'becoming confused' and 'errors' with 'mistakes'.

× I prefer making a trial run and learn by my errors instead of reading an instruction and be confused.

✓ I prefer making a trial run and learning from my mistakes instead of reading instructions and becoming confused.

'Reading an instruction' is awkward; use plural 'instructions' or 'the instructions' depending on context. Plural 'instructions' is more natural when referring to general manuals. Also adjust articles to match natural English.

× Reading instructions helps a person to avoid mistakes and not to be confused.

✓ Reading instructions helps a person avoid mistakes and avoid becoming confused.

Use parallel infinitive structure without redundant 'to' ('helps a person avoid'). Also prefer 'avoid becoming confused' over 'not to be confused' for natural phrasing.

× Moreover, it uh, prevents uh, the one from problems that might occur, uh, in case of incorrect use of something.

✓ Moreover, it prevents a person from problems that might occur in case of incorrect use of something.

'The one' is incorrect in this context; use 'a person' or 'someone'. Remove unnecessary fillers and commas. 'Prevents a person from problems' is natural. Could also say 'prevents problems that might occur due to incorrect use.'