Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, actually I'm not very good at memorizing things. For example I I always forget important dates or appointments, which makes me a bit worried sometimes.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once forgot forgot my close friend's birthday, which makes me feel bad because I miss the chance to celebrate with them. Sometimes I also forget, uh, important dates and appointments.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, in my daily life I need to remember when I should go to class because having class online is very important. Besides that, I also try to keep track of my homework deadlines and avoid any last minute stress.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually rely on some digital apps like Apple Calendar because it helps me keep track of important events and deadlines. For example, I can send reminders in advance so I never forget important things.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时有重复词汇("I I"),影响流畅性。建议避免重复,回答更简洁自然。可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. For instance, I often forget important dates or appointments, which sometimes makes me feel anxious.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇("forgot forgot")和口头语("uh"),影响表达的自然和流畅。建议避免重复和口头语,回答时更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For example, I once missed my close friend's birthday, which made me feel bad because I missed the chance to celebrate with them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,内容具体且连贯。建议使用更多连接词使表达更自然,例如使用"also"或"in addition"来连接句子。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember when I should attend online classes because they are very important. In addition, I also keep track of my homework deadlines to avoid last-minute stress.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,表达清晰。可以尝试使用更多多样的词汇替换"important things",使表达更丰富。
Ví dụ: I usually rely on digital apps like Apple Calendar because they help me keep track of significant events and deadlines. For instance, I set reminders in advance to ensure I never forget crucial tasks.
× I once forgot forgot my close friend's birthday, which makes me feel bad because I miss the chance to celebrate with them.
✓ I once forgot my close friend's birthday, which made me feel bad because I missed the chance to celebrate with them.
这里的动作发生在过去,所以动词时态应该用过去式。原句中“makes”和“miss”是现在时,应该改为过去时“made”和“missed”,以保持时态一致。
× which makes me a bit worried sometimes.
✓ which makes me a bit worried sometimes.
该句中“makes”使用正确,因为描述的是现在的状态,没有错误。
× Sometimes I also forget, uh, important dates and appointments.
✓ Sometimes I also forget important dates and appointments.
句中“forget”使用正确,描述的是经常发生的事情,没有错误。
× Well, in my daily life I need to remember when I should go to class because having class online is very important.
✓ Well, in my daily life I need to remember when I should go to class because having class online is very important.
句中时态使用正确,没有错误。
× Besides that, I also try to keep track of my homework deadlines and avoid any last minute stress.
✓ Besides that, I also try to keep track of my homework deadlines and avoid any last minute stress.
句中时态使用正确,没有错误。
× Well, I usually rely on some digital apps like Apple Calendar because it helps me keep track of important events and deadlines.
✓ Well, I usually rely on some digital apps like Apple Calendar because it helps me keep track of important events and deadlines.
句中时态使用正确,没有错误。
× For example, I can send reminders in advance so I never forget important things.
✓ For example, I can send reminders in advance so I never forget important things.
句中时态使用正确,没有错误。