Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答有些语法错误，表达不够自然，且内容有些重复。建议使用更准确的时态和表达方式，避免重复，并且回答时尽量简洁明了。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things now. When I was younger, I could easily remember places I played and memories with my friends. But since I started high school and university, I mainly focus on remembering academic knowledge.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，且用词不当。建议使用正确的句型表达情感和具体例子，避免模糊和错误的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, which always makes me feel sorry. For example, I used to remember my friends' birthdays at school, but after entering university, I often forget them, which makes my friends feel disappointed.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，注意动词形式和词序，使句子更通顺。

Ví dụ: I usually make a to-do list to organize my daily routine, which helps me avoid forgetting important tasks. However, I think I should prioritize my tasks better to be more efficient.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用完整的句子，清楚表达自己的方法，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I make a daily to-do list to remember important things. I also keep a clear mindset and reflect every day to ensure I don't forget anything important.

× However, when I was young I memorized lots of things like where I play or some memory between my friends.

✓ However, when I was young I memorized lots of things like where I played or some memories with my friends.

句子中描述过去的事情，动词play应使用过去式played；memory应使用复数memories，且介词between用错，应改为with。

× However, after I go to the high school and university, my memory is just to recognize the knowledge.

✓ However, after I went to high school and university, my memory was just to recognize knowledge.

描述过去发生的事情，动词go应使用过去式went；high school前不加冠词the；my memory后时态应与前文一致，改为was；knowledge前不加冠词。

× Yes of course and the happens like that will always make me feel so apologize.

✓ Yes, of course, and things like that always make me feel so sorry.

句子结构混乱，the happens like that不合语法，应改为things like that；feel后接形容词sorry而非动词apologize。

× For instance I have so many ******** and when I was in the school I always remember their birthday but after I went the university I often forget them and it make them sad.

✓ For instance, I have so many friends and when I was in school I always remembered their birthdays, but after I went to university I often forgot them and it made them sad.

friends应为复数；in the school和the university中the不应使用；remember应使用过去式remembered；birthday应使用复数birthdays；forget应使用过去式forgot；make应使用过去式made。

× Personally I prefer to do some To Do List to help me engage my routine and it help me avoid forgetting anything, but I think I should put my routine prioritize.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make some To-Do Lists to help me manage my routine and it helps me avoid forgetting anything, but I think I should prioritize my routine.

do some To Do List不合适，应改为make some To-Do Lists；engage my routine用词错误，应为manage my routine；it help应为it helps；put my routine prioritize语法错误，应为prioritize my routine。

× As I mentioned before, I prefer to make A to do list daily and make sure that I have a clear mindset to keep my daily routine fluently.

✓ As I mentioned before, I prefer to make a to-do list daily and make sure that I have a clear mindset to keep my daily routine running smoothly.

A to do list中to do list应连写为to-do list，且a应小写；keep my daily routine fluently表达不当，应改为keep my daily routine running smoothly。

× Plus, I will contemplate every day and think about what things I make sure I.

✓ Plus, I will contemplate every day and think about the things I need to make sure of.

句子结构不完整，think about what things I make sure I不通顺，应改为think about the things I need to make sure of。