Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorizing things because I study law, which requires me to remember many laws and regulations.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复，并确保信息连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot where I put my credit card, but luckily my mother found it in the pocket of my coat.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember many laws and regulations because I study law. I also have daily tests and quizzes that require good memory.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用简洁的句子，避免重复，并清晰表达记忆方法。

Ví dụ: I remember important things by writing them down or saving them on my phone, which helps me review them conveniently.

× There are a lot of laws and regulations for me to remember, so I must exercise my exercise, my memorization very well.

✓ There are a lot of laws and regulations for me to remember, so I must exercise my memorization very well.

句子中“exercise my exercise”重复，且“exercise”作为名词时不合适，应该用“memorization”表示记忆力。去掉重复的“exercise”使句子更通顺。

× Yes, I once forgot where my credit card was laid on.

✓ Yes, I once forgot where my credit card was laid.

“laid on”是不正确的过去分词短语，正确表达应为“was laid”，表示信用卡被放置的位置。

× However, fortunately I found my quick credit credit card by my mother and she taught.

✓ However, fortunately I found my credit card with the help of my mother and she taught me.

句子结构混乱，“quick credit credit card”重复且不合适，且“by my mother”应改为“with the help of my mother”，动词“taught”后应加宾语“me”。

× She told me that she was in my pocket of my coat it.

✓ She told me that it was in the pocket of my coat.

代词使用错误，“she”指人，不应指代信用卡，应使用“it”；“pocket of my coat”前应加定冠词“the”，且“it”应放在句尾。

× We are in my daily life and need to remember a lot of regulars and laws in in my mind because I'm major in laws.

✓ In my daily life, I need to remember a lot of rules and laws in my mind because I'm majoring in law.

“regulars”应为“rules”；“I'm major in laws”应为“I'm majoring in law”，动词形式和名词单复数需调整。

× There are some tests and quizzes daily in my daily life so I must remember them very well.

✓ There are some tests and quizzes daily in my daily life, so I must remember them very well.

句子缺少逗号，影响阅读流畅性，添加逗号使句子更清晰。

× Well, I I remember in important things by writing them down or or make make them on my phone or check them on my phone because I think it is making them on my on my phone is very convenient way to to help me review it also writing them down.

✓ Well, I remember important things by writing them down or making notes on my phone or checking them on my phone because I think making notes on my phone is a very convenient way to help me review, as well as writing them down.

句子中有重复词汇“I I”，“or or make make”，动词形式错误，“make”应为“making”；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达更清晰流畅。