Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I think I am good at memories in things, umm, for example, uh, I can remember, uh, a lot of things, uh, that happened when I was, was a child and uh, it's also in study. I can, uh, remember, uh, a lot of.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have forgot a meeting between I and my friends uh, on the last month my friend came from other city and to go to my city to play with me uh, but I forgot, forgot these things.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
For me, I am a university student so I must to remember the technology from study in my daily life.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Uh, for me, I will take the notes about some details about something I must do. Uh, for example, I will make a schedule to play the important things I must do in a day.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复填充词,表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复使用“uh”等填充词,并且注意动词形式的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, I can easily recall many events from my childhood as well as important information I learned at school.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子结构混乱,且有重复词汇。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构,表达要简洁明了。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important meeting with my friends last month. My friend came from another city to visit me, but I completely forgot about our plan.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 句子中存在语法错误,表达不清晰。建议明确表达需要记住的具体内容,并使用正确的语法结构。
Ví dụ: As a university student, I need to remember the knowledge and skills I learn during my studies every day.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单且有重复填充词,表达不够流畅。建议使用连词使句子更连贯,并且具体说明记笔记和制定计划的方法。
Ví dụ: I usually take notes to record important details and make a daily schedule to organise the tasks I need to complete.
× I think I am good at memories in things
✓ I think I am good at memorising things
这里'memories'是名词复数形式,但句子中需要动名词形式'memorising'来表示记忆的动作。应使用动名词来表达擅长做某事。
× I have forgot a meeting between I and my friends
✓ I have forgotten a meeting between me and my friends
'have forgot'是不正确的完成时态形式,正确的完成时态应使用过去分词'forgotten'。此外,'between I and my friends'中'I'应改为宾格'me'。
× between I and my friends
✓ between me and my friends
'between'后面应使用宾格代词,'I'是主格,应改为宾格'me'。
× on the last month my friend came from other city and to go to my city to play with me
✓ last month my friend came from another city to my city to play with me
'on the last month'应改为'last month',表示时间点时不加介词;'other city'应为'another city',表示另一座城市;'and to go to my city'结构不正确,直接用不定式表达目的。
× I must to remember the technology from study in my daily life
✓ I must remember the technology from my studies in my daily life
'must'后面不加'to',直接接动词原形;'study'应改为复数名词'studies'表示学习内容。
× I will make a schedule to play the important things I must do in a day
✓ I will make a schedule to plan the important things I must do in a day
'make a schedule to play'中的'play'用词不当,应为'plan'表示安排计划。