Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响了表达的清晰度。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇，如'memorising'而非'memory things'，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at memorising things because I find it difficult. However, I am better at analyzing subjects like mathematics and technology. But I always try my best to improve my memory skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如'the date and the time of the examination'表达不流畅，且句子未完整。建议使用简单明了的句子，清楚描述事件。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important exam date when I graduated from high school. I confused the date and time, so I missed the test.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多语法和表达错误，句子不连贯。建议直接回答问题，使用简单句子描述需要记住的具体内容，并注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily schedule to manage my time well. For example, I wake up early and study according to my plan.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了方法，但句子结构混乱，重复较多，影响理解。建议简洁明了地描述记忆方法，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

Ví dụ: I usually write important things in a list and save it on my phone. When I forget something, I check the list to see what I need to do, especially in the evening.

× No, actually I'm not good at memory things because it's so hard for me that I just I'm good at analyze for example the mathematics and the technique subject and I'm not good at the lecture and for example English.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things because it's so hard for me. I'm just good at analyzing, for example, mathematics and technical subjects, and I'm not good at lectures, for example, English.

这里“memory things”应改为“memorizing things”，因为“memorizing”是动名词，表示记忆的动作，而不是“memory things”。另外，“analyze”应改为“analyzing”，保持动名词形式一致。

× No, actually I'm not good at memory things because it's so hard for me that I just I'm good at analyze for example the mathematics and the technique subject and I'm not good at the lecture and for example English.

✓ No, actually I'm not good at memorizing things because it's so hard for me. I'm just good at analyzing, for example, mathematics and technical subjects, and I'm not good at lectures, for example, English.

动词后接动名词形式时，应使用动词的-ing形式，如“good at analyzing”。

× I'm just good at analyze for example the mathematics and the technique subject and I'm not good at the lecture and for example English.

✓ I'm just good at analyzing, for example, mathematics and technical subjects, and I'm not good at lectures, for example, English.

“the technique subject”应为复数“technical subjects”，因为指多个学科；“the lecture”应为复数“lectures”，表示多门课程。

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important because for example, uh, when I graduated from senior senior school, I need to take part in a very, very important examination, but I was mixed to the, the date and the time of the examination.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important because, for example, when I graduated from senior school, I needed to take part in a very important examination, but I mixed up the date and time of the examination.

“have ever forgotten”用法不当，应为“have forgotten”；“I need”应为过去时“I needed”；“was mixed to”应为“mixed up”，表示混淆。

× Yes, I have ever forgotten something important because for example, uh, when I graduated from senior senior school, I need to take part in a very, very important examination, but I was mixed to the, the date and the time of the examination. So I'm so I missed the test that I can that I.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important because, for example, when I graduated from senior school, I needed to take part in a very important examination, but I mixed up the date and time of the examination. So I missed the test.

“I'm so I missed the test that I can that I”句子结构混乱，应简化为“So I missed the test”。

× I need you. I need to memorize about my schedule of the daily life because I needed to guidance our guidance, my guidance what I have to do at in a day.

✓ I need to memorize my daily schedule because I need guidance on what I have to do in a day.

“I need you”不合适，应去掉；“needed to guidance our guidance, my guidance”表达混乱，应改为“need guidance”；“at in a day”应为“in a day”。

× I need to memorize about my schedule of the daily life because I needed to guidance our guidance, my guidance what I have to do at in a day.

✓ I need to memorize my daily schedule because I need guidance on what I have to do in a day.

“memorize about”错误，动词“memorize”后不加“about”；“guidance on”是正确搭配；“at in a day”应为“in a day”。

× For example, I will get up in the early and then I will study that all.

✓ For example, I will get up early and then I will study all day.

“in the early”错误，应该去掉冠词，直接用“early”；“study that all”表达不清，应改为“study all day”。

× Well, I will write the very important thing in at least and and save it on my phone, on my mobile phone, for example, when I forgot something, I will take it out and check it.

✓ Well, I will write the very important things at least and save them on my phone, on my mobile phone. For example, when I forget something, I will take it out and check it.

“write the very important thing in at least”表达错误，应为“write the very important things at least”；“forgot”时态应与一般现在时“when I forget”一致。

× What are what are the things that I haven't I haven't to do. I haven't do I haven't done and at the evening.

✓ What are the things that I haven't done yet in the evening.

“I haven't to do”错误，应为“haven't done”；“I haven't do”错误，应为“haven't done”；“and at the evening”应为“in the evening”。