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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Well, I think in my childhood I was really good at memorizing anything. But no, I cannot remember things very quickly. Sometimes I just repeat the things I need to know several times.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

I remember, I remember vividly that once a time I have forgotten a really important formulation in my math course when I took the exam. I can not feel it out.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Well, the first thing I think is the study content of my major. You know, my major is mathematics and I really spend a lot of time memorizing the formulations. Secondly, I think it must be the birthday date of some important people like my mother's and my father's birthday date.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Firstly, I think I can just repeat them several times because this can help me remember them quickly and deeply and never forget it maybe. Secondly, I think I would use some. Eco electronic Devices.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应更直接地回应问题,避免前后矛盾。可以简洁表达自己的记忆能力,并用具体例子支持。

Ví dụ: I used to be good at memorizing things when I was a child. However, now I find it harder to remember quickly, so I often repeat important information several times to help me recall it.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。应直接说明忘记了什么,并简要描述当时的情景。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot an important formula during a math exam, which made me feel very nervous and affected my performance.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较具体,但句子结构可以更自然流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember the study materials for my major, which is mathematics, especially formulas. Besides that, I also try to remember important dates like my parents' birthdays.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰,且有语法和用词错误。建议简洁明了地说明记忆方法,并避免断句错误。

Ví dụ: I usually repeat important information several times to remember it better. Also, I use electronic devices like reminders on my phone to help me keep track of important things.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I remember, I remember vividly that once a time I have forgotten a really important formulation in my math course when I took the exam.

I remember, I remember vividly that once I forgot a really important formulation in my math course when I took the exam.

这里使用了现在完成时'have forgotten',但句子中提到的事件发生在过去的具体时间(考试时),应使用一般过去时'forgot'。在描述过去发生的具体事件时,应使用一般过去时。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I can not feel it out.

I could not figure it out.

短语'feel it out'用法不当,正确表达应为'figure it out',意为'弄清楚'。此外,时态应与上下文一致,使用过去时'could not'。

Singular and plural issue

× the birthday date of some important people like my mother's and my father's birthday date.

the birthdays of some important people like my mother and my father.

'birthday date'重复且不自然,通常用'birthday'表示生日。'my mother's and my father's birthday date'应改为'my mother and my father's birthdays',且复数形式'birthdays'更合适。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I really spend a lot of time memorizing the formulations.

I really spend a lot of time memorizing formulations.

'the formulations'中的定冠词'the'不必要,除非特指某些公式。此处泛指公式,去掉'the'更自然。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× this can help me remember them quickly and deeply and never forget it maybe.

this can help me remember them quickly and deeply and maybe never forget them.

代词使用不一致,前面指代复数'them',后面却用单数'it',应保持一致使用复数'them'。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think I would use some. Eco electronic Devices.

I think I would use some electronic devices.

句中'Eco'与上下文不符且多余,应去掉。此外,'Devices'不应大写,且句中不应有多余的句点。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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