Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not good at memorizing things. I often forget where I put my keys or shampoo, so I usually write reminders on paper to help me remember.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, once I forgot my friend's 19th birthday. I felt very sorry, but I sent her a present before the day to make up for it.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够连贯，句子结构混乱，建议理清思路，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: I need to remember many things in daily life. As a student, I focus on my subjects, prepare for work, and learn how to operate computers.

Gợi ý: 回答表达较为口语化且有语法错误，建议使用更正式的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: It's simple. I write important things in a memo on my digital device or make a list on paper to help me remember.

× No, I'm not good at memorizing things so I always for forget where I put my key and where put my shampoo all the time so I always listed on the paper to let me remember it.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing things so I always forget where I put my key and where I put my shampoo all the time, so I always list it on paper to help me remember.

句中出现了“for forget”，这是错误的动词形式，应该直接用动词原形“forget”。另外，“where put my shampoo”缺少主语，应补充“I”。“listed”用错了时态，应该用现在时“list”。整体句子时态应保持一致。

× Yes I have one time that's my friends have her 19 years old birthday and that day I totally forget it.

✓ Yes, I have. One time, it was my friend's 19th birthday and that day I totally forgot it.

句中“forget”应使用过去式“forgot”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情。

× Yes I have one time that's my friends have her 19 years old birthday and that day I totally forget it.

✓ Yes, I have. One time, it was my friend's 19th birthday and that day I totally forgot it.

“my friends have her 19 years old birthday”表达不清，应该改为“it was my friend's 19th birthday”，明确指代并使用正确的所有格形式。

× I'm so sorry about her but I sent her the present before her birthday umm.

✓ I'm so sorry to her but I sent her the present before her birthday.

“sorry about her”应改为“sorry to her”，表达对某人的歉意时用“sorry to someone”。

× A lot of thing I think uh, because I'm a student now, so I need to remember about my subject knowledge and also I need to learn the other things such As for my work preparing and also the knowledge about regulate the computer.

✓ A lot of things, I think, uh, because I'm a student now, so I need to remember my subject knowledge and also need to learn other things such as work preparation and knowledge about regulating computers.

“A lot of thing”应为复数“things”。“such As”大小写错误，应为“such as”。“work preparing”应改为“work preparation”。“knowledge about regulate the computer”应改为“knowledge about regulating computers”，动名词形式和复数形式更合适。

× A lot of thing I think uh, because I'm a student now, so I need to remember about my subject knowledge and also I need to learn the other things such As for my work preparing and also the knowledge about regulate the computer.

✓ A lot of things, I think, uh, because I'm a student now, so I need to remember my subject knowledge and also need to learn other things such as work preparation and knowledge about regulating computers.

“remember about”中“about”多余，动词“remember”后直接接宾语即可。

× That's that's simple. You just need to put your things want to remember and write it into the memo on your digital devices or just write a list on the paper.

✓ That's simple. You just need to put the things you want to remember and write them into a memo on your digital devices or just write a list on paper.

“things want to remember”缺少关系代词“you”，应为“things you want to remember”。“write it into the memo”中“it”指代不明，改为“them”更准确。

× That's that's simple. You just need to put your things want to remember and write it into the memo on your digital devices or just write a list on the paper.

✓ That's simple. You just need to put the things you want to remember and write them into a memo on your digital devices or just write a list on paper.

“the memo”应改为不定冠词“a memo”，因为这里指的是任何备忘录，不是特指的备忘录。“on the paper”中“the”多余，改为“on paper”。