Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和表达不够自然，且句子结构较为简单。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法，如时态和冠词的使用。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things. I can remember important information, but I find it difficult to recall numbers or complex details.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免直译中文表达。可以增加细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, during my first year at university, I forgot to attend one of my final exams. It was a terrible experience for me.

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，句子结构混乱。建议分句表达，使用连接词使句子更流畅。同时，具体说明需要记住的内容会更好。

Ví dụ: I need to remember many things in my daily life, such as my routine tasks and academic lessons.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但可以使用更自然的表达方式，并丰富细节。建议使用更地道的词汇和句型，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually use technology to help me remember important things, like the Notes app on my phone. Sometimes, I send messages to myself as reminders.

× Well, I memorize things not very well.

✓ Well, I don't memorize things very well.

句子中缺少助动词'do'来构成否定句，正确的表达应该是'I don't memorize'。在一般现在时的否定句中，动词前需要加助动词'do'。

× For some things important I will remember it, but since like numbers or some complex information it was a bit hard for me to remember.

✓ For some important things, I will remember them, but for things like numbers or some complex information, it is a bit hard for me to remember.

句子结构混乱，缺少必要的介词和代词，且时态不一致。'some things important'应改为'some important things'，'it'应改为'them'以指代复数名词。

× Yes, in the first year I went to university, I forgot one of my final exam.

✓ Yes, in the first year I went to university, I forgot one of my final exams.

'exam'应使用复数形式'exams'，因为'one of'后面应接复数名词。

× It was a terrible accident I met.

✓ It was a terrible accident that happened to me.

原句结构不完整，'accident I met'表达不正确，应使用定语从句'that happened to me'来修饰'accident'。

× I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life I need to do with my routine works and I also need to work with my academic lesson.

✓ I need to remember a lot of things in my daily life. I need to do my routine work and also study my academic lessons.

原句缺少标点符号，导致句子过长且结构混乱。'routine works'应为'routine work'，'work with'用法不当，应直接使用动词。

× I usually use some technical tools to help me remember important things, such as the Note app in my phone.

✓ I usually use some technical tools to help me remember important things, such as the Notes app on my phone.

'Note app'应为'Notes app'，且' in my phone'应改为'on my phone'，因为应用程序通常安装在设备的表面。

× I also send messages to myself to memorize them.

✓ I also send messages to myself to help me remember them.

'to memorize them'用法不当，应该用'help me remember them'，因为人是记忆的主体，消息是帮助记忆的工具。