Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I cancel myself quite good at memorizing. For example when I studied for exam I usually technology like respection and excitation which help her remain information more effective. These abilities has been useful I think.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have forgotten something important before such as umm such as forgotten deadline for school project and their exam umm.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In daily life, it's important to remember to study organized and magnet time effectively. For example, umm, keeping a chart, offer appointment and deny help reduce stress and increase productivity. Umm, I think, uh, I think remember in your daily life is very easy.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually remember important things by writing them down in a plane and they're using digital app on my phone. I think this mouse is very easy and can help me organizing tasks and the city reminder I think is very easy because.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当,如“cancel myself quite good”应为“I consider myself quite good”,“technology like respection and excitation”表达不清且拼写错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,并避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorising. For example, when I studied for exams, I usually used techniques like repetition and association, which helped me retain information more effectively.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“forgotten deadline for school project and their exam”表达不清。建议简洁明了地回答问题,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as the deadline for a school project and an exam date.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清,如“study organized and magnet time effectively”应为“stay organized and manage time effectively”,“offer appointment and deny help”表达不明确。建议使用准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构。
Ví dụ: In daily life, it's important to stay organized and manage time effectively. For example, keeping a schedule, setting appointments, and asking for help when needed can reduce stress and increase productivity.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇和语法错误,如“writing them down in a plane”应为“writing them down on a planner”,“this mouse is very easy”表达不当。建议使用正确的词汇和完整的句子表达。
Ví dụ: I usually remember important things by writing them down in a planner and using digital apps on my phone. I think this method is very easy and helps me organize tasks and set reminders effectively.
× Yes, I cancel myself quite good at memorizing.
✓ Yes, I consider myself quite good at memorizing.
这里的 'cancel' 用错了,正确的动词是 'consider',表示 '认为'。学生误用了发音相近的单词,导致句意错误。建议记忆常用动词搭配,避免混淆。
× For example when I studied for exam I usually technology like respection and excitation which help her remain information more effective.
✓ For example, when I studied for exams, I usually use techniques like repetition and association which help me remember information more effectively.
句中 'technology' 应为 'techniques','respection' 和 'excitation' 是错误拼写,正确为 'repetition' 和 'association'。'help her remain' 应为 'help me remember',代词错误且动词用法错误。建议加强词汇拼写和搭配学习。
× These abilities has been useful I think.
✓ These abilities have been useful, I think.
主语 'abilities' 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 'have',而不是单数 'has'。这是主谓一致错误。建议注意主语单复数与动词形式的一致。
× Yes, I have forgotten something important before such as umm such as forgotten deadline for school project and their exam umm.
✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important before, such as the deadline for a school project and their exams.
句中 'forgotten deadline' 应为 'the deadline','their exam' 代词使用不明确,应根据上下文明确指代。建议注意代词的准确使用和冠词的添加。
× In daily life, it's important to remember to study organized and magnet time effectively.
✓ In daily life, it's important to study in an organized way and manage time effectively.
'remember to study organized' 结构不正确,应为 'study in an organized way';'magnet time' 是错误表达,应为 'manage time'。建议加强固定搭配和介词用法。
× For example, umm, keeping a chart, offer appointment and deny help reduce stress and increase productivity.
✓ For example, keeping a chart, making appointments, and asking for help reduce stress and increase productivity.
'offer appointment' 和 'deny help' 用词错误,正确表达应为 'making appointments' 和 'asking for help'。建议学习常用动词短语。
× Umm, I think, uh, I think remember in your daily life is very easy.
✓ I think remembering things in daily life is very easy.
句子结构混乱,重复使用 'I think',且 'remember' 应为动名词 'remembering'。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的动词形式。
× I usually remember important things by writing them down in a plane and they're using digital app on my phone.
✓ I usually remember important things by writing them down on a plan and using a digital app on my phone.
'in a plane' 应为 'on a plan','they're using' 代词错误,应直接用动名词 'using'。建议注意介词和代词的正确使用。
× I think this mouse is very easy and can help me organizing tasks and the city reminder I think is very easy because.
✓ I think this method is very easy and can help me organize tasks, and the app reminder is also very easy to use.
'mouse' 用词错误,应为 'method';'help me organizing' 应为 'help me organize';'the city reminder' 可能是 'app reminder'。句子不完整,需补充完整。建议加强词汇准确性和句子完整性。