Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct response first, then add a clear example with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, once I went to a busy shop and accidentally forgot to pay because the owner was busy. This experience helped me remember to be more careful in crowded places.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the situation with specific details using linking words to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before. For instance, once I went to a crowded cafe near my house and after ordering coffee, I forgot my phone there. I realized it only after I left the cafe.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Give a clear topic sentence about what you need to remember daily, then support it with specific examples and linking words.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember my schedule and important tasks. For example, I keep track of meetings and deadlines to stay organized and avoid forgetting important activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is not clearly expressed. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your methods with linking words and specific details.

Ví dụ: I remember important things by using different methods. For instance, I write notes or record videos to help me recall information. Also, I sometimes text reminders to friends to help me remember important events.

× Is I am good at memorizing things, memorizing embarrassing things.

✓ I am good at memorizing things, especially embarrassing things.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is' at the beginning and has subject-verb agreement issues. The correct form is 'I am' without 'Is'. This correction aligns the subject 'I' with the verb 'am'.

× Like once time I go to one stop and there was a crowded shop and, uh, owners is like busy with selling different items and I, I, I forgot to pay and it's a little bit it's, I don't know.

✓ Once, I went to a shop that was crowded, and the owner was busy selling different items. I forgot to pay, and it was a little embarrassing.

The sentence mixes present tense 'go' with past events. 'Go' should be in past tense 'went' to match the past context. Also, 'owners is' should be 'owner was' for singular subject and past tense. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Is one time I went one cafe which was located into my house and there was so crowded and there are lots of people and after then I, I think coffee and other items.

✓ One time, I went to a cafe near my house. It was very crowded, and there were lots of people. After that, I ordered coffee and other items.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'Is' at the start and mixes tenses. 'Is' is unnecessary. 'Think coffee' is incorrect; it should be 'ordered coffee'. 'There are' should be 'there were' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Then I, I forgot my phone to here, uh, after that when I came up.

✓ Then, I forgot my phone here. After that, when I came back, I realized it.

The phrase 'forgot my phone to here' is incorrect; it should be 'forgot my phone here'. 'Came up' is unclear; 'came back' or 'returned' fits better. The sentence is adjusted for clarity and correct past tense usage.

× The topic of daily life, daily life is the 1 chapter, which includes one day one activity and another day, different types of activity.

✓ The topic of daily life is the first chapter, which includes one activity per day and different types of activities on other days.

The phrase 'one day one activity' is unclear and lacks prepositions. Adding 'per' clarifies the meaning. 'Another day' should be 'other days' to indicate multiple days. 'Types of activity' should be plural 'activities' for consistency.

× So whenever I, for, uh, I, I, I experience no one thing.

✓ So whenever I, uh, experience something new.

The phrase 'experience no one thing' is incorrect. It should be 'experience something new' to convey the intended meaning. The sentence is simplified for clarity.

× And after that, uh, one day I experience new thing.

✓ And after that, one day I experienced a new thing.

'Experience' should be in past tense 'experienced' to match the past context. 'New thing' should be preceded by an article 'a' to be grammatically correct.

× That's why I think it's, it's remembered to, uh, need daily life.

✓ That's why I think it's important to remember things needed in daily life.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'It's remembered to need daily life' is incorrect. The correction clarifies the intended meaning using proper pronouns and structure.

× Sometimes I remember imported things by different types of methods.

✓ Sometimes I remember important things by using different methods.

'Imported things' is incorrect; it should be 'important things'. 'Different types of methods' is redundant; 'different methods' suffices.

× Whenever one day I write and one day I click video and to save whenever I need that video I always play that and oh that is my important things to remember and whenever I text one person to Remember Me and that the.

✓ Sometimes, I write things down or record videos to save them. Whenever I need to remember, I play those videos. Also, I text someone to remind me.

The original sentence has incorrect prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'Click video' should be 'record videos'. 'To save whenever I need that video' is rephrased for clarity. 'Text one person to Remember Me' is corrected to 'text someone to remind me'. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.