Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
To be honest, and I'm bad at membrane things, for example, I often forgot where I put my keys or phone.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes I have. I often forgot where I put my keys or phone.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to recall the deadlines of my projects or assessments.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I usually set a reminder on my phone like a candles to keep track of important days and deadlines.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和拼写错误,如“membrane”应为“memorising”,动词时态也不正确。建议注意动词时态的一致性,并避免拼写错误,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or my phone.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答重复了前一个问题的内容,缺乏新信息。建议提供不同的例子或详细说明忘记的重要事情,以丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, such as missing a meeting because I didn't write it down in my calendar.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以通过添加更多细节和连接词使表达更完整和连贯。
Ví dụ: I need to remember the deadlines of my projects and assessments because missing them could affect my grades.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不恰当的比喻“like a candles”,影响表达的自然性。建议使用更合适的表达,并注意语法和词汇的准确性。
Ví dụ: I usually set reminders on my phone to keep track of important days and deadlines.
× To be honest, and I'm bad at membrane things, for example, I often forgot where I put my keys or phone.
✓ To be honest, I'm bad at memorising things. For example, I often forget where I put my keys or phone.
句中使用了过去时态 "forgot",但描述的是经常发生的习惯动作,应使用一般现在时 "forget"。另外,原句中 "membrane" 是拼写错误,应为 "memorising"。句子结构也不完整,去掉多余的 "and" 更通顺。
× Yes I have. I often forgot where I put my keys or phone.
✓ Yes, I have. I often forget where I put my keys or phone.
这里 "forgot" 是过去时,描述的是经常发生的情况,应使用一般现在时 "forget"。另外,"Yes I have" 后面应加逗号以符合书面表达习惯。
× I usually set a reminder on my phone like a candles to keep track of important days and deadlines.
✓ I usually set a reminder on my phone like a candle to keep track of important days and deadlines.
"candles" 是复数形式,但前面有不定冠词 "a",应使用单数 "candle"。此外,"like a candle" 这里比喻用法合理,但需保持单数形式一致。