Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Uh, actually I'm not too very good at memorizing things because I find it is difficult for me to remember a lot of information at once. Instead, I prefer to use logic and reasoning to understand concepts and knowledges.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Well, let me think. Actually, I haven't. I hardly forgot important things such as exams and meetings and interviews. Also, I usually set a reminder, reminders and alarms to help me stay.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Well, actually in my daily life there aren't many things I need to remember. But sometimes I have to remember some appointments such as group meetings or lessons. Also, I need to remember the deadline for assignments.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually use my phone to set alarms and reminders to remember important things. They can help me stay organized and avoid forgotten important tasks. For example, I usually set reminders for meetings and guidelines.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“not too very good”和“knowledges”,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复和冗余。
Ví dụ: Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I find it hard to remember a lot of information at once. Instead, I prefer to use logic and reasoning to understand concepts.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“hardly forgot”和“reminder, reminders”,且句子结构不够连贯,建议使用正确的时态和复数形式,并增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Well, I can't recall forgetting anything important. I rarely forget important events like exams, meetings, or interviews because I usually set reminders and alarms to help me stay organized.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富细节使内容更具体。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I don't have many things to remember. However, I sometimes need to remember appointments like group meetings or lessons, and I also have to keep track of assignment deadlines.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“avoid forgotten important tasks”,建议使用正确的表达方式,并且可以增加更多具体细节和连接词。
Ví dụ: I usually use my phone to set alarms and reminders to remember important things. This helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks. For example, I set reminders for meetings and deadlines.
× Instead, I prefer to use logic and reasoning to understand concepts and knowledges.
✓ Instead, I prefer to use logic and reasoning to understand concepts and knowledge.
“knowledge”是不可数名词,不能加复数形式“knowledges”,应使用单数形式。
× Actually, I haven't. I hardly forgot important things such as exams and meetings and interviews.
✓ Actually, I haven't. I have hardly forgotten important things such as exams, meetings, and interviews.
此处应使用现在完成时态“have hardly forgotten”,表示从过去到现在的经历;“forgot”是一般过去时,不符合语境。
× Also, I usually set a reminder, reminders and alarms to help me stay.
✓ Also, I usually set reminders and alarms to help me stay organized.
“a reminder, reminders”重复且不合适,应统一使用复数形式“reminders”;另外句子不完整,补充“organized”使句子完整。
× Well, actually in my daily life there aren't many things I need to remember.
✓ Well, actually in my daily life there aren't many things that I need to remember.
缺少关系代词“that”,使句子结构完整,表达更清晰。
× They can help me stay organized and avoid forgotten important tasks.
✓ They can help me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks.
“avoid”后应接动名词“forgetting”,而非过去分词“forgotten”,这是固定搭配。