Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but it has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. Also, make your sentences clearer and more concise.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. I prefer to be creative because it allows me to think more freely and feel confident, especially when facing difficult questions.

Gợi ý: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions which affect fluency. Try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid repeating the same words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget important things, such as buying medicine from the pharmacy or groceries when my mother asks me to. This happens especially when I am busy or distracted.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to make your sentences complete and use linking words to explain your ideas logically. Avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Ví dụ: I don't need to put much effort into remembering daily tasks because they have become habits, like brushing my teeth. However, a few months ago, I had to remind myself to complete my study tasks regularly to stay punctual.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to use correct expressions and complete sentences. Also, explain your methods clearly and logically.

Ví dụ: Since I am not good at remembering things, I usually write important tasks on paper or in my phone's notes. Sometimes, I also set alarms to remind me, which helps a lot.

× I never in my life did memorized answer and I prefer creativity more than memorizing answer 'cause it gives you more space and gives you more confidence in writing if you if someone having a difficult question.

✓ I have never in my life memorized answers and I prefer creativity more than memorizing answers because it gives you more space and more confidence in writing if someone has a difficult question.

The phrase 'did memorized' is incorrect because 'did' requires the base form of the verb, so it should be 'did memorize' or better 'have memorized' to express experience. Also, 'memorizing answer' should be plural 'memorizing answers' to match the context. 'If you if someone having' is incorrect; it should be 'if someone has' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct tense.

× I prefer creativity more than memorizing answer 'cause it gives you more space and gives you more confidence in writing if you if someone having a difficult question.

✓ I prefer creativity more than memorizing answers because it gives you more space and more confidence in writing if someone has a difficult question.

The phrase 'in writing if you if someone having' is incorrect. It should be 'in writing if someone has' to correctly use prepositions and maintain proper sentence structure.

× Yes, it always happens with me, like forgetting uh, buying medicine from uh, pharmacy and buying something from stores when I'm going out and my mother, uh, my mom, my mom tells me my mom's, my mom tells me to buy something from uh, from the grocery and I forget.

✓ Yes, it always happens to me, like forgetting to buy medicine from the pharmacy or something from stores when I'm going out, and my mom tells me to buy something from the grocery, but I forget.

The phrase 'happens with me' should be 'happens to me' to use the correct preposition. Also, 'my mom's, my mom tells me' is redundant and confusing; it should be simplified. 'From the grocery' is better as 'from the grocery store' or just 'from the grocery' if understood.

× I don't need to, I don't need really much effort to remember daily things 'cause it comes automatically in my mind that I have to brush my teeth.

✓ I don't really need much effort to remember daily things because it comes automatically to my mind that I have to brush my teeth.

The phrase 'I don't need really much effort' is awkward; 'I don't really need much effort' is the correct order. Also, 'comes automatically in my mind' should be 'comes automatically to my mind' for correct preposition use.

× But, uh, three months back when I was focused on my studies, I have to remember daily, my daily task regularly to do my and, uh, to be, uh, punctual.

✓ But, three months ago when I was focused on my studies, I had to remember my daily tasks regularly to do them and to be punctual.

The phrase 'three months back' is better as 'three months ago'. 'I have to remember' should be past tense 'I had to remember' to match the past time frame. 'My daily task' should be plural 'my daily tasks' to be consistent. 'To do my and' is incomplete and corrected to 'to do them'.

× As I said earlier, I'm really bad at remembering things, so if the stuff is big or I write it down in my paper or if I'm killing the phone I write it in my phone notes and that really helps me remembering important things.

✓ As I said earlier, I'm really bad at remembering things, so if the stuff is big, I write it down on my paper or if I'm using the phone, I write it in my phone notes and that really helps me remember important things.

The phrase 'write it down in my paper' should be 'write it down on my paper' because we write on paper. 'I'm killing the phone' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm using the phone'. 'Helps me remembering' should be 'helps me remember' because 'help' is followed by the base verb form.

× Sometimes putting alarm also very.

✓ Sometimes putting an alarm is also very helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. Adding 'an alarm' with the article and 'is also very helpful' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.