Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和冗余，同时注意时态和冠词的使用。可以尝试用更清晰的句子表达自己的观点。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things because I often forget important dates. To help me, I always use a To-Do List. For example, I once forgot the time of an exam, which caused me a lot of trouble.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议使用连贯的句子表达，避免重复词汇，并且注意冠词和时态的正确使用。可以增加一些细节来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once missed an important online quiz because I forgot the deadline. As a result, I got a very low grade, which I deeply regret.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时提供更具体的细节。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember meeting times with my classmates, deadlines for group projects, and final exam dates. Besides study, I also remember my friends' birthdays and other important events.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不清的问题，建议使用简单明了的句子，注意词汇的准确使用，并且使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually write important information in my diary to remember it in the future. I also make a To-Do List to keep track of deadlines, times, and locations of events.

× Actually I think I'm a people who easy to forget things with bad experience with bad memories.

✓ Actually I think I'm a person who is easy to forget things with bad experiences and bad memories.

people 是复数形式，前面用的是单数不定冠词 a，应该用单数形式 person。experience 需要复数形式 experiences 来表示多次经历。

× Actually I think I'm a people who easy to forget things with bad experience with bad memories.

✓ Actually I think I'm a person who is easy to forget things with bad experiences and bad memories.

easy 是形容词，修饰主语时需要用系动词 is 连接，构成定语从句。

× I always need to the To Do List to assist me to realize things.

✓ I always need a To Do List to assist me in realizing things.

这里提到的是泛指的待办事项列表，应该用不定冠词 a 而不是定冠词 the。

× I always need to the To Do List to assist me to realize things.

✓ I always need a To Do List to assist me in realizing things.

动词 realize 后面接动名词形式 realizing，表示动作的进行。

× Last time I even forget the exam time so I thought it.

✓ Last time I even forgot the exam time so I missed it.

forget 的过去式是 forgot，且后半句表达不完整，应该用 missed it 表示错过考试时间。

× I missed, I missed a important quiz for my course because I forgot the deadline for it.

✓ I missed an important quiz for my course because I forgot the deadline for it.

important 以元音音素开头，前面不定冠词应为 an 而不是 a。

× I'm very, I'm very the regret for it.

✓ I really regret it.

regret 是动词，不能用 the 修饰，且表达应简洁，使用 I really regret it 更合适。

× For the study, I usually need to remember what the time I should have a meeting with my college or what's the deadline of the teamwork or the final exam time.

✓ For study, I usually need to remember the time I should have a meeting with my colleague or the deadline of the team work or the final exam time.

college 是大学的意思，表示同事应使用 colleague。teamwork 是不可数名词，表示团队合作，若指团队作业应分开写为 team work。

× I usually need to remember what the time I should have a meeting with my college or what's the deadline of the teamwork or the final exam time.

✓ I usually need to remember the time I should have a meeting with my colleague or the deadline of the team work or the final exam time.

college 是大学，colleague 才是同事，语义错误。

× I always do A to do list to help me to to regard it's the deadline, the time or the location of the things.

✓ I always make a to-do list to help me remember the deadline, the time, or the location of things.

do a to-do list 不合适，应该用 make a to-do list。regard 用法错误，应该用 remember。things 前不需要定冠词。