Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“memory things”应为“memorising things”，“ride in my calendar”应为“write in my calendar”。建议你使用更准确的词汇和句型，并且注意句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think I am good at memorising things. However, as we get older, we tend to forget more. Therefore, I have developed a habit of writing important things in my calendar to avoid forgetting them.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰，如“Since I am the university”应为“Since I was at university”，“I'm so scary”应为“I was very scared”。建议你练习使用正确的时态和表达情绪的词汇，使回答更准确和自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot to attend my final exam when I was at university. I was very scared and worried about my final score. Fortunately, my teacher gave me another chance to take the exam.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构混乱，重复使用“remember”，表达不够简洁。建议你简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: The most important thing I need to remember daily is the time to go to school because I am a student. It is essential for me to be punctual to be a good student.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达较为简单，存在语法错误，如“let me remember this thing”应为“help me remember things”。建议你使用更丰富的词汇和句型，使回答更自然且信息更完整。

Ví dụ: I use Google Calendar to help me remember important tasks and appointments. For example, I enter the details in advance, and the app sends me reminders so I don't forget anything.

× Yes, I think I'm good at memory things, but I think if we get older and older we will forget something.

✓ Yes, I think I'm good at memorising things, but I think if we get older and older we will forget some things.

这里'memory things'用法不正确，应该用动名词'memorising things'表示记忆的动作，且'something'改为复数'some things'更符合语境。

× So now I will have a habit is every important things I will ride in my calendar that can invoice I forget.

✓ So now I have a habit: for every important thing, I will write it in my calendar so that I don't forget.

句子结构混乱，'will have a habit is'错误，应该用现在时'have a habit'；'ride'应为'write'；'every important things'应为'singular'形式'every important thing'；'that can invoice I forget'表达不清，改为'so that I don't forget'更准确。

× Since I am the university, I forget to go to school for the final exam.

✓ Since I was at the university, I forgot to go to school for the final exam.

'Since I am the university'表达错误，应该是'Since I was at the university'表示过去的时间点；'forget'应为过去时'forgot'。

× I'm so scary and afraid of the my final score.

✓ I was so scared and afraid of my final score.

'I'm so scary'错误，'scary'是形容词，表示令人害怕的，应该用过去时态的形容词'scared'表示感到害怕；'the my'重复，去掉'the'。

× So unfortunately teacher led me to have one more chance.

✓ So fortunately, the teacher gave me one more chance.

'led me to have one more chance'表达不自然，改为'gave me one more chance'更符合英语习惯；'unfortunately'与语境不符，应为'fortunately'。

× Most important things I have to remember in my life, daily life, is remember the time to go to school because I'm a student now.

✓ The most important thing I have to remember in my daily life is the time to go to school because I'm a student now.

'Most important things'应为单数'the most important thing'，因为后面谓语用单数'is'；'daily life'前加定冠词'the'更自然。

× So I think this is one of the things I must have to do it well is be a good student.

✓ So I think one of the things I must do well is to be a good student.

'must have to do it well'表达冗余且不正确，改为'must do well'；'is be a good student'应为'is to be a good student'。

× I will use Google Calendar to let me remember important things.

✓ I will use Google Calendar to help me remember important things.

'to let me remember'用法不自然，改为'to help me remember'更符合英语表达习惯。

× For example, I will write any time I have to do something or I have an appointment before the day.

✓ For example, I will write down any time I have to do something or have an appointment before the day.

'write any time'缺少介词'down'，应为'write down'；'I have an appointment before the day'表达不清，建议改为'have an appointment scheduled for the day'。

× Umm, Google Calendar will remind me, let me remember this thing.

✓ Umm, Google Calendar will remind me and help me remember these things.

'let me remember this thing'表达不自然，改为'help me remember these things'更准确；'this thing'改为复数'these things'更符合上下文。