Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm pretty good at at memorizing things, especially the things that I'm interested in. For example, I really like health related topics and I really I'm really good at memorizing things that related with biology and human anatomy.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Once when I went out I forgot my keys and the next time I couldn't get back to home and was challenging for me since it was valuable seeing.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
So one thing that is really important for me to remember is to schedule my day and plan all the things that I should do like around the day, especially things that are related with my studies and with my homeworks. Because it's really, it's really challenging for me to study without the planning.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
As I said, usually I schedule them or plan them so I cannot forget them next time, especially when I have something valuable for me to do. I always write them as a note or in order to not forget.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Cavabınız təbii və mövzuya uyğun olsa da, təkrarlardan qaçın və cümlələri daha qısa və aydın qurun. Məsələn, "I'm really good at memorizing things related to biology and human anatomy because I find health topics interesting." kimi ifadələr daha effektivdir.
Ví dụ: Yes, I'm good at memorizing things, especially those related to biology and human anatomy, because I find health topics very interesting.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və məna aydınlığı problemi var. Daha aydın və düzgün ifadə etməyə çalışın. Məsələn, "Once, I forgot my keys when I went out, so I couldn't get back home, which was very challenging for me."
Ví dụ: Once, I forgot my keys when I went out, so I couldn't get back home, which was very challenging for me.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə təkrarlardan və qrammatik səhvlərdən qaçın. Daha qısa və aydın ifadələr istifadə edin. Məsələn, "I need to remember to schedule my day and plan my tasks, especially my studies and homework, because studying without planning is challenging for me."
Ví dụ: I need to remember to schedule my day and plan my tasks, especially my studies and homework, because studying without planning is challenging for me.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə daha çox əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin və ifadələri daha təbii edin. Məsələn, "I usually schedule or plan important tasks so I don't forget them. Additionally, I write notes to remind myself."
Ví dụ: I usually schedule or plan important tasks so I don't forget them. Additionally, I write notes to remind myself.
× Yes, I'm pretty good at at memorizing things, especially the things that I'm interested in.
✓ Yes, I'm pretty good at memorizing things, especially the things that I'm interested in.
The phrase 'good at at memorizing' contains a repeated preposition 'at'. The correct form is to use 'good at memorizing' with only one 'at'. Repeating prepositions is grammatically incorrect and should be avoided.
× I really I'm really good at memorizing things that related with biology and human anatomy.
✓ I really, I'm really good at memorizing things that are related to biology and human anatomy.
The phrase 'related with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'related to'. Also, the sentence lacks the verb 'are' before 'related'. The correct form is 'things that are related to biology and human anatomy.'
× Once when I went out I forgot my keys and the next time I couldn't get back to home and was challenging for me since it was valuable seeing.
✓ Once when I went out, I forgot my keys and the next time I couldn't get back home and it was challenging for me since it was valuable to me.
The phrase 'get back to home' is incorrect; the correct form is 'get back home' without 'to'. Also, the phrase 'was challenging for me' lacks a subject; it should be 'it was challenging for me'. The phrase 'valuable seeing' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'valuable to me' is more appropriate.
× So one thing that is really important for me to remember is to schedule my day and plan all the things that I should do like around the day, especially things that are related with my studies and with my homeworks.
✓ So one thing that is really important for me to remember is to schedule my day and plan all the things that I should do throughout the day, especially things that are related to my studies and my homework.
The phrase 'like around the day' is incorrect; 'throughout the day' is the correct expression. Also, 'related with' should be 'related to'. The plural 'homeworks' is incorrect; 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.
× As I said, usually I schedule them or plan them so I cannot forget them next time, especially when I have something valuable for me to do.
✓ As I said, usually I schedule them or plan them so I cannot forget them next time, especially when I have something valuable to do.
The phrase 'valuable for me to do' is awkward; the correct form is 'valuable to do'. The preposition 'for me' is unnecessary here and makes the sentence less natural.
× I always write them as a note or in order to not forget.
✓ I always write them as a note or in order not to forget.
The phrase 'in order to not forget' is less natural; the correct form is 'in order not to forget'. The negation 'not' should come before the verb without 'to' separating them.