Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
We are not good at memorizing things to be honest, but I try to writing down something important in my notebook or my phone. This method helps me to not avoid something crucial.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have forgotten something important before. One day it was my turn to be on duty in our school, but I was too busy with other exam tests and I overstepped and I felt very guilty. After that, I write down something important.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
We are at the university student. The most important things I need to remember in my daily life is the exam days. Missing an exam date could seriously affect my grades, so I always write them down in my planner. This helps me stay organized and avoid any last minute surprises.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
Well, I often write down something important in my notebook, planner and my phone. This message helps me to organize my schedule and don't forget anything crucial, especially when I have a busy week again.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“try to writing”应为“try to write”,且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更流畅自然。
Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising things, but I try to write down important information in my notebook or phone. This helps me remember crucial tasks and avoid forgetting them.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“overstepped”用法不当,且句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和清晰的句子结构来表达经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my duty at school because I was busy preparing for exams. I felt very guilty, so since then I always write down important tasks to avoid forgetting them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“We are at the university student”应为“I am a university student”,且句子可以更简洁自然。建议注意主谓一致和简洁表达。
Ví dụ: I am a university student, and the most important things I need to remember are exam dates. Missing an exam could seriously affect my grades, so I always write them down in my planner to stay organized.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“This message helps me to organize”应为“This method helps me to organize”,且句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确词汇和更自然的表达。
Ví dụ: I usually write down important things in my notebook, planner, or phone. This method helps me organize my schedule and avoid forgetting anything important, especially during busy weeks.
× I try to writing down something important in my notebook or my phone.
✓ I try to write down something important in my notebook or my phone.
动词try后面接不定式to write,而不是动名词writing。动词不定式用法错误。
× This method helps me to not avoid something crucial.
✓ This method helps me avoid something crucial.
动词help后面直接接动词原形avoid,不需要to和not的组合,且句意应为帮助避免,原句表达混乱。
× After that, I write down something important.
✓ After that, I wrote down something important.
句子描述过去发生的事情,动词应使用过去时write的过去式wrote。
× We are at the university student.
✓ We are university students.
主语是复数we,表明多个人,student应使用复数students。
× The most important things I need to remember in my daily life is the exam days.
✓ The most important things I need to remember in my daily life are the exam days.
主语things为复数,谓语动词应使用复数are,保持主谓一致。
× Well, I often write down something important in my notebook, planner and my phone.
✓ Well, I often write down something important in my notebook, planner, and phone.
my在phone前重复使用显得冗余,且列举多个物品时应统一表达。
× This message helps me to organize my schedule and don't forget anything crucial, especially when I have a busy week again.
✓ This message helps me organize my schedule and not forget anything crucial, especially when I have a busy week again.
help后接动词原形不带to,且并列动词应保持一致,使用not forget而非don't forget。