Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to reduce filler words like 'uh' and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a more structured answer by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding specific details. For example, mention what kinds of things you remember well and what you find challenging.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at memorizing information, especially facts and numbers. However, I sometimes struggle to remember people's faces, which is something I want to improve.

Gợi ý: Avoid excessive filler words and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your answer with specific examples of how your methods help you avoid forgetting important things.

Ví dụ: Fortunately, I have never forgotten anything important because I am very meticulous. I use a To-Do List and check my personal calendar daily, which helps me stay organized and remember all my tasks.

Gợi ý: Work on grammar and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence and explain specifically what you need to remember daily. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember appointments, deadlines, and household chores. Managing all these can be difficult, but I use a To-Do List to stay organized and focused on my tasks.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating filler words and unclear expressions like 'my personal calendar is my caveat.' Use clear and natural phrases. Provide a structured answer with linking words and specific details.

Ví dụ: I remember important things by using my personal calendar and To-Do List. These tools help me manage my daily routines effectively and ensure I don't forget any tasks.

× I have a memory like an elephant, uh, but unfortunately, uh, I'm not good at remembering uh, faces and I should work on it.

✓ I have a memory like an elephant, uh, but unfortunately, uh, I'm not good at remembering faces and I should work on it.

The preposition 'at' is correctly used with 'good' in 'good at remembering faces'. The sentence is correct in this part, so no correction needed here.

× I have a memory like an elephant, uh, but unfortunately, uh, I'm not good at remembering uh, faces and I should work on it.

✓ I have a memory like an elephant, uh, but unfortunately, uh, I'm not good at remembering faces, and I should work on it.

A comma before 'and' improves sentence clarity by separating two independent clauses.

× Fortunately, uh, as I am meticulous, uh, I haven't forgotten something important because, uh, I have To Do List and every day I check my tasks with my personal calendar and, uh, it helps me.

✓ Fortunately, uh, as I am meticulous, uh, I haven't forgotten anything important because, uh, I have a To Do List and every day I check my tasks with my personal calendar and, uh, it helps me.

Use 'anything' instead of 'something' in negative sentences for correctness. Also, 'a To Do List' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'To Do List'.

× I have To Do List and every day I check my tasks with my personal calendar and, uh, it helps me.

✓ I have a To Do List and every day I check my tasks with my personal calendar and, uh, it helps me.

The phrase 'To Do List' is a singular countable noun and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× I haven't forgotten something important because, uh, I have To Do List and every day I check my tasks with my personal calendar and, uh, it helps me.

✓ I haven't forgotten anything important because, uh, I have a To Do List and every day I check my tasks with my personal calendar and, uh, it helps me.

In negative sentences, 'anything' is preferred over 'something' to correctly express negation.

× Managing appropriate life aside is a really difficult but I tackle it with my To Do List and it helps me to stay organized and focused on my tasks and daily routines.

✓ Managing an appropriate life aside is really difficult, but I tackle it with my To Do List, and it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks and daily routines.

The phrase 'Managing appropriate life aside' is unclear and awkward. Adding 'an' before 'appropriate life' and restructuring the sentence with commas improves clarity and flow. Also, 'helps me to stay' can be simplified to 'helps me stay' for naturalness.

× Managing appropriate life aside is a really difficult but I tackle it with my To Do List and it helps me to stay organized and focused on my tasks and daily routines.

✓ Managing an appropriate life aside is really difficult, but I tackle it with my To Do List, and it helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks and daily routines.

The phrase 'Managing appropriate life aside' is unclear; 'aside' is not correctly used here. The sentence is corrected by removing 'aside' and adding 'an' before 'appropriate life' to make it grammatically correct.

× As I told you, my personal calendar is my caveat and, uh, I use my To Do List and, uh, by this way, uh, I can, uh, manage my, uh, daily routines.

✓ As I told you, my personal calendar is my caveat and, uh, I use my To Do List and, uh, in this way, uh, I can, uh, manage my, uh, daily routines.

The phrase 'by this way' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'in this way' to indicate the method or manner.