Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to make it sound more natural and coherent. For example, instead of repeating 'memorising', you can use synonyms or related phrases. Also, try to connect your ideas smoothly using linking words like 'because' or 'therefore'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself quite proficient at memorising. Since I am studying medicine, which demands extensive memorisation, I have developed effective techniques over the past year. Therefore, I have become better at retaining information.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer flow better. Also, adding a personal example could make your answer more specific and engaging.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten important things before, which I think is quite normal. Because we often have busy schedules and many tasks, it's easy to overlook something occasionally. For instance, I once forgot an appointment due to a hectic day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is thoughtful but a bit abstract and lacks specific details. To improve, try to give concrete examples or explain why remembering to love is important. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I believe it's essential to remember to show love and care to family and friends. For example, taking time to call my parents or help a friend in need reminds me to value these relationships deeply.

Gợi ý: Your answer is honest but could be improved by elaborating more on your methods and using linking words to make your response more coherent. Also, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to memory techniques.

Ví dụ: I don't follow a strict method to remember important things, but I trust that significant matters naturally stay in my mind. Nevertheless, when I feel something might slip, I jot it down in a notebook to ensure I don't forget.

× I am currently studying in medical school and the syllabus requires a lot of memorising.

✓ I am currently studying at medical school and the syllabus requires a lot of memorising.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to attending an institution like a school; the correct preposition is 'at'. This is a preposition usage error (ID 11).

× So after studying for a year, I believe that I have adapted and gotten better at memorising things.

✓ So after studying for a year, I believe that I have adapted and gotten better at memorising things.

No correction needed here as 'memorising' is correctly used as a gerund after the preposition 'at'.

× I believe that forgetting something important is quite common.

✓ I believe that forgetting something important is quite common.

No correction needed; 'forgetting' is correctly used as a gerund subject of the sentence.

× This is because we have so many things to do, so many errands to run, we are bound to forget one or two things, and it is perfectly normal.

✓ This is because we have so many things to do, so many errands to run; we are bound to forget one or two things, and it is perfectly normal.

The sentence is grammatically correct but could be improved by replacing the comma with a semicolon to separate independent clauses. However, this is a punctuation issue, not listed in the grammar problem types, so no correction is made.

× In my opinion, the most important thing to remember in your daily life is to love your family, friends, lovers, everyone that is in your life.

✓ In my opinion, the most important thing to remember in one's daily life is to love your family, friends, lovers, everyone who is in your life.

The pronoun 'your' is inconsistent with the general statement; 'one's' is more appropriate for general advice. Also, 'that' should be 'who' when referring to people. This is an incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).

× I think that a lot of people forget to love.

✓ I think that a lot of people forget to love.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I don't have a specific strategy or technique to remember important things.

✓ I don't have a specific strategy or technique to remember important things.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× I believe that if something is important to you, you won't forget it that easily.

✓ I believe that if something is important to you, you won't forget it that easily.

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× However, if I do forget some things, I will write it down to prevent.

✓ However, if I do forget some things, I will write them down to prevent forgetting.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'some things' (plural); it should be 'them'. Also, the verb 'prevent' requires an object or gerund; 'to prevent forgetting' is correct. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and incorrect use of pronouns (ID 12).