Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details using linking words. Avoid filler words and redundancy. For example, you can say, "Yes, I am good at memorising things. When I was in school, I used to memorise chapters before exams, which helped me remember them for a long time."

Ví dụ: Yes, I am good at memorising things. When I was in school, I used to memorise chapters before exams, which helped me remember them for a long time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is direct but lacks fluency and clarity. Use linking words and avoid hesitation sounds. Provide a clear reason or example to support your answer. For instance, "No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always make sure to memorise important dates accurately."

Ví dụ: No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I always make sure to memorise important dates accurately.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly with supporting details using linking words. For example, "In daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. To do this, I stay focused and active, which helps me memorise things better."

Ví dụ: In daily life, I need to remember important tasks and appointments. To do this, I stay focused and active, which helps me memorise things better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to give a clear topic sentence and explain your method with linking words. For example, "I don't use any special techniques, but I focus carefully whenever I hear or read something important, which helps me remember it."

Ví dụ: I don't use any special techniques, but I focus carefully whenever I hear or read something important, which helps me remember it.

× Yes, I am pretty good at memorizing the things.

✓ Yes, I am pretty good at memorizing things.

The article 'the' before 'things' is unnecessary here because 'things' is used in a general sense. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural and grammatically correct.

× Like when I was at my school levels I used to I used to memory the uh chapters at the time of exams.

✓ Like when I was at my school levels, I used to memorize the chapters at the time of exams.

The verb 'memory' is incorrectly used as a verb; the correct verb form is 'memorize'. Also, the repeated phrase 'I used to' is redundant and should be corrected.

× Like I used to wait and have the memory for the long term for the minute.

✓ Like I used to wait and have the memory for the long term, not just for a minute.

The phrase 'for the minute' is unclear and likely incorrect. Clarifying the intended meaning improves the sentence. Also, 'wait' seems out of place; possibly 'retain' or 'keep' would be better, but as per instructions, only correcting grammar issues listed.

× No, I haven't forgotten something important because I'm quite good at, uh, memorizing the things I memorize the date or anythings like I memorize it accurate.

✓ No, I haven't forgotten anything important because I'm quite good at memorizing things; I memorize dates or anything like that accurately.

'Somethings' should be 'anything' in negative sentences. 'The things' is unnecessary; 'things' suffices. 'Anythings' is incorrect; 'anything' is correct. 'Accurate' is an adjective; the adverb 'accurately' should be used to modify the verb 'memorize'.

× I don't think so. We need anything else to remember in our day-to-day life, but we have to be active and focus in certain things that we are doing which help us to memorize the things for the long term.

✓ I don't think so. We don't need anything else to remember in our day-to-day life, but we have to be active and focus on certain things that we are doing which help us to memorize things for the long term.

In negative sentences, 'anything' should be used with 'don't'. The preposition 'focus in' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on'. Also, 'the things' is unnecessary; 'things' is sufficient.

× And yes, of course, I have to say that I am pretty good at memorizing things because I always focus on the certain topic or certain things.

✓ And yes, of course, I have to say that I am pretty good at memorizing things because I always focus on certain topics or certain things.

The definite article 'the' before 'certain topic' is incorrect; 'certain' already specifies the noun, so 'the' should be removed. Also, 'topic' should be plural to match 'things' and the general meaning.

× MMM, I don't have any points to remember the important things, but what I can say is whenever something, uh, important things is telling to me or I'm reading the something important, I do have focus in that, in that thing.

✓ MMM, I don't have any points to remember important things, but what I can say is whenever something important is told to me or I'm reading something important, I do focus on that, on that thing.

'The important things' should be 'important things' without 'the' for general meaning. 'Something important things' is incorrect; 'something important' is correct. 'Is telling to me' should be passive 'is told to me'. 'I do have focus in' should be 'I do focus on'. 'The something important' should be 'something important'.