MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, I am pretty good at remembers in things. I can easily record a member and date it, and I often remember people's name and face. I also enjoy playing memory games where you help me improve my memory.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, I want to forgot my best friend's birthday. I feel really bad about it because we are very close. I apologize and promise to to make it up then.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I needed to remember my work day, magazine lie and meeting. I also have to check my emails and messages to my make sure I don't miss anything important.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Hey using my smartphone to remember important things I started remembers and rose for test takes I immediately do and I usually lead to apps to keep track and date is it's really helpful for me.

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“remembers in things”应为“remembering things”,且表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,避免拼写错误。回答内容应更简洁,避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I am quite good at remembering things. For example, I can easily recall people's names and faces. I also enjoy playing memory games, which help me improve my memory skills.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“want to forgot”应为“forgot”。句子不完整且表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子表达感受和后续行动。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my best friend's birthday. I felt really bad because we are very close. I apologized and promised to make it up to her.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在时态错误和拼写错误,如“needed”应为“need”,“magazine lie”不明确。建议使用正确时态,表达清晰具体,避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: I need to remember my work schedule, meetings, and important deadlines. I also check my emails and messages regularly to make sure I don't miss anything important.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱,表达不清晰,存在拼写和结构错误。建议简洁明了地说明使用手机和应用程序来帮助记忆,注意句子结构和词汇准确性。

Ví dụ: I use my smartphone to remember important things. I set reminders and use apps to keep track of my tasks and dates, which is very helpful for me.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Yes, I am pretty good at remembers in things.

Yes, I am pretty good at remembering things.

动词短语中,介词后面应使用动名词形式,不能用动词原形。这里介词at后应接动名词remembering。

Singular and plural issue

× I can easily record a member and date it, and I often remember people's name and face.

I can easily record a number and date it, and I often remember people's names and faces.

名词的单复数形式错误。'member'应为'number',且'name'和'face'应使用复数形式'names'和'faces',因为指的是多个人的名字和面孔。

Verb + -ing form

× I also enjoy playing memory games where you help me improve my memory.

I also enjoy playing memory games which help me improve my memory.

关系代词引导的定语从句中,主语应与先行词一致,且原句中'where you help me'不合适,应改为'which help me'。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I want to forgot my best friend's birthday.

Yes, I forgot my best friend's birthday.

动词时态错误。'want to forgot'应为'forgot',表示过去发生的动作。

Modal verb usage

× I apologize and promise to to make it up then.

I apologize and promise to make it up then.

多余的to重复出现,应删除一个to。

Past tense issue

× I needed to remember my work day, magazine lie and meeting.

I need to remember my workday, magazine line and meetings.

时态错误,应使用现在时'need',且单词拼写错误,'work day'应为'workday','magazine lie'应为'magazine line','meeting'应为复数形式'meetings'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I also have to check my emails and messages to my make sure I don't miss anything important.

I also have to check my emails and messages to make sure I don't miss anything important.

介词使用错误,'to my make sure'应为'to make sure',去掉多余的'my'。

Sentence structure errors

× Hey using my smartphone to remember important things I started remembers and rose for test takes I immediately do and I usually lead to apps to keep track and date is it's really helpful for me.

I use my smartphone to remember important things. I start remembering and preparing for tests immediately, and I usually lead to apps to keep track of dates. It's really helpful for me.

句子结构混乱,缺少主谓一致和连贯性。应拆分为多个句子,调整词序和用词,使表达清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BadSubstandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
BestFinest; To the highest standard
CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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