Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, 'take down notes of the things that is important' should be 'take down notes of the things that are important'. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'for example certain tasks or A to do list' which could be simplified. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things. Therefore, I usually write down important tasks in a to-do list, which helps me remember what I need to accomplish during the day.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains awkward phrasing such as 'I have tried forgetting something very important' which is incorrect. It should be 'I have forgotten something very important'. Also, 'creating A to do' is incomplete; it should be 'creating a to-do list'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important before, especially when my schedule is very hectic. To prevent this from happening again, I make sure to jot down notes and create a to-do list.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and general. Avoid repeating words like 'should should' and 'are are'. Also, try to personalize your answer instead of speaking generally about 'people'. Use linking words to improve coherence and provide specific examples or reasons.

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important tasks and responsibilities. Besides that, I also remind myself to pay attention to the people around me, as maintaining good relationships is equally important.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'also' and use linking words to connect ideas. Try to use more varied vocabulary and personalize your response.

Ví dụ: I remember important things by making lists and setting reminders on my phone. Additionally, sometimes I ask friends or family to remind me about important tasks.

× What I usually do is I take down notes of the things that is important for the day, like for example certain tasks or A to do list which reminds me to accomplish these tasks within the day.

✓ What I usually do is I take down notes of the things that are important for the day, like for example certain tasks or a to-do list which reminds me to accomplish these tasks within the day.

The subject 'things' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with lowercase 'a' and hyphens for correct noun form.

× Yes, I have tried forgetting something very important.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something very important.

The phrase 'have tried forgetting' is incorrect here. The correct present perfect form is 'have forgotten' to indicate an experience of forgetting something important.

× That is why I try to avoid it happening again by jotting down notes and creating A to do.

✓ That is why I try to avoid it happening again by jotting down notes and creating a to-do list.

The phrase 'creating A to do' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'creating a to-do list' with the indefinite article 'a' and the noun phrase 'to-do list' properly formed.

× People should should remember that it's not only the things that they have to do but also remind themselves that people around them are are also important.

✓ People should remember that it's not only the things that they have to do but also remind themselves that people around them are also important.

The sentence has repeated words 'should should' and 'are are' which are typographical errors. Removing the duplicates corrects the pronoun and verb usage.