Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, to be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things because uh, I can forget many things uh, easily and I always make some mistakes. So in case of the situation, I will take some notes in advance to make sure I can remember them.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. I remember when I was a child, I forgot a necklace from my grandmother. This necklace was very important in my family because there was a special meaning for this necklace, but I lost it when I go.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
During my previous internship, my mentor always asked me for several texts at the same time, so I had to remember all of them and completed them efficiently. It was a little bit difficult for me because I can forgot many things easily.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I always take notes on my mobile phones to remember them, such as, uh, some tasks I have to do this week or some important things my family told to me. And in this way I can, uh, avoid many mistakes.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和填充词，如“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少重复表达，使用更自然简洁的句子，并避免过多停顿词。
Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I tend to forget easily. Therefore, I usually take notes beforehand to help me remember important information.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“when I go”应为“when I was going”。建议注意时态和句子结构，表达更准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was a child, I lost a necklace from my grandmother that was very important to my family because it had special meaning.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中时态混用和语法错误影响表达，如“can forgot”应为“can forget”。建议注意时态一致性和语法正确性，同时内容应更贴近日常生活。
Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember various tasks and deadlines, especially during my internship when my mentor assigned multiple tasks that I had to complete efficiently.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但存在填充词“uh”，影响流畅性。建议减少停顿词，使用更连贯的表达。
Ví dụ: I usually take notes on my mobile phone to remember important tasks or things my family tells me. This method helps me avoid making mistakes.
Ngữ pháp
× but I lost it when I go.
✓ but I lost it when I went.
这里描述的是过去发生的事情，动词需要用过去式。'go'的过去式是'went'，所以应改为'when I went'。
× because I can forgot many things easily.
✓ because I can forget many things easily.
情态动词'can'后面应接动词原形，不能用过去式'forgot'，所以应改为'can forget'。
× some important things my family told to me.
✓ some important things my family told me.
动词'tell'后面直接接宾语，不需要介词'to'，所以应去掉'to'，改为'told me'。
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