Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Используйте более ясную структуру: начните с краткого прямого ответа, затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Устраните грамматические ошибки и повторения. Например, замените расплывчатые слова («instruments») на конкретные («tools», «apps»). Старайтесь говорить не более 3–4 предложений и используйте связки (because, so, for example).

Ví dụ: Not really. I find it hard to memorise things because I forget details easily, so I use tools to help me. For example, I use note-taking apps and flashcards when I study to review information regularly.

Gợi ý: Начните с прямого ответа, затем кратко расскажите ситуацию и действие, которое вы предприняли. Исправьте ошибки в словах и грамматике (например, «date», «put» вместо «said»). Используйте связки (for example, so, because) и приведите конкретное действие и результат.

Ví dụ: Yes. Once I forgot my mother's birthday and she was very upset, so I put the date in my phone calendar. Now it sends me a reminder a few days before, so I don't forget again.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо и перечисляйте конкретные повседневные вещи, которые вы должны помнить. Уберите шумовые слова («uh») и исправьте времена и формы глаголов («whether I have paid», «if I ordered»). Используйте связки для перечисления (for example, such as) и дайте 2–3 конкретных примера.

Ví dụ: I need to remember everyday tasks, such as whether I have paid my bills for the month and whether I have picked up a delivery. For example, I check my banking app for payments and track parcels so I don't miss collection deadlines.

Gợi ý: Дайте ясный и логичный ответ: начните с метода, затем объясните, как вы его используете, и добавьте результат. Уберите лишние «uh» и исправьте конструкции («set a reminder», «in advance by a few days», «its sound»). Используйте связки (then, so, therefore) и краткий пример.

Ví dụ: I set a reminder on my phone for important events and usually schedule it a few days in advance. Then the phone notifies me with an alarm, so I don't miss appointments or deadlines.

× Not really honestly memorization is heal especially when I try to learn or study and try to remember things I learned but I cannot keep everything in my mind so I try to use different instruments to help me with it.

✓ Not really; honestly, memorization is hard, especially when I try to learn or study and remember things I have learned, but I cannot keep everything in my mind, so I try to use different tools to help me.

The sentence has multiple structure and word-choice issues: 'heal' should be 'hard' (spelling/word error), run-on sentence needs punctuation and connectors, tense consistency requires present perfect 'have learned' for prior learning, and 'instruments' is better as 'tools'. Suggest breaking into clauses with commas and semicolons, use correct word 'hard', and present perfect for past learning still relevant now.

× Yes that was a shame. I forgot about my mother's birthday one time and she was very upset about it.

✓ Yes, that was a shame. I forgot my mother's birthday once and she was very upset about it.

Use comma after interjection and 'one time' is awkward; 'once' is more natural. Past simple 'forgot' is correct; adjust wording for naturalness.

× So I said this data in my calendar and it reminds me every time if it date is coming.

✓ So I put this date in my calendar and it reminds me whenever the date is coming.

'Said this data' is incorrect; use 'put this date'. 'Data' is wrong noun. 'Whenever the date is coming' or better 'when the date is approaching' fits present tense habitual action. Also replace 'if it date is coming' with correct clause.

× Well, in my daily life, I have to remember very casual things like whether I paid for bills this month or if I order some delivery, uh, if I need to go to delivery point and took my order, such things.

✓ Well, in my daily life I have to remember very ordinary things like whether I have paid the bills this month, or if I ordered a delivery, whether I need to go to the pickup point and collect my order, things like that.

Maintain tense consistency: use present perfect 'have paid' for this month, 'ordered' fits past action possibly completed, and 'took my order' should be 'collect' or 'pick up'. Replace 'casual' with 'ordinary' and 'delivery point' with 'pickup point'.

× If the thing I need to remember is important, I set reminder on my calendar in my mobile phone and uh, I set it in advance, uh, for a few days and so it always reminds me by uh, it's sound signal so I don't miss it.

✓ If something I need to remember is important, I set a reminder on my phone's calendar in advance, a few days before, and it always reminds me with its sound so I don't miss it.

Add indefinite article 'a' before 'reminder', use possessive 'phone's calendar', simplify 'set it in advance for a few days' to 'in advance, a few days before'. 'By it's sound signal' is incorrect; use 'with its sound'. Also remove filler words for clarity.