Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 핵심을 잘 전달하였으나 문법 실수와 반복, 연결 표현 부족으로 점수가 떨어집니다. 특히 동사 시제와 단수/복수 일치(예: 'slip' → 'slip' 또는 'slipped'), 불필요한 구두점과 어색한 표현('so so')을 고쳐 더 명확하게 말하세요. 또한 짧은 주제문 뒤에 이유를 연결할 때 'because'나 'when' 같은 연결어를 사용해 문장을 논리적으로 이어가세요. 예문을 3~4문장으로 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요.

Ví dụ: I'm so-so at memorising things; I can easily remember topics that interest me. However, I often forget people's names, especially when I'm nervous at parties. Because nervousness makes me flustered, I sometimes blank out and need a reminder.

Gợi ý: 내용은 적절하지만 문법 오류와 중복 단어(예: 'a was', 'my my')가 있어 전달력이 떨어집니다. 문장을 두세 개로 나누어 각각의 사건을 간결하게 설명하고, 사건의 결과와 자신의 대응을 연결어로 명확히 표현하세요('because', 'so', 'after that'). 또한 인물 지칭에서는 단수/복수 일치를 맞추고(‘friend’와 ‘them’) 대명사를 일관되게 사용하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Once I left my umbrella at a café because I was in a hurry. I also forgot a close friend's birthday, which was embarrassing, so I apologised and took her out for coffee to make it up to her.

Gợi ý: 주제문은 명확하지만 문장에서 누락된 단어와 어색한 구문('I often reminders')이 있습니다. 문법적으로 완전한 문장을 사용하고, 예시를 연결할 때 'for example' 뒤에는 구체적 행동을 명확히 기술하세요. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 유지하고, 연결어('because', 'so')를 사용해 논리성을 높이세요.

Ví dụ: I need to remember assignments and meeting schedules because missing them could make me fall behind at work or at university. For example, I often set reminders on my phone so I don't miss important appointments.

Gợi ý: 좋은 전략을 제시했지만 단어 선택과 문법(단수/복수, 중복 'am', 'a lot of text')에서 오류가 있습니다. 'smartphone alarm' 대신 'smartphone alarms' 또는 'my smartphone's alarm'처럼 자연스럽게 표현하고, 두 번째 문장은 주어-동사 일치를 확인하세요. 또한 구체적 예시(예: calendar apps, to-do lists)를 덧붙이면 더 설득력 있습니다.

Ví dụ: I rely on tools like smartphone alarms and sticky notes. These audible reminders help me stay organised, especially when I'm busy; I also use calendar apps and to-do lists to keep track of tasks.

× Student: So so I remember things I'm interested in, but the names often slipped my mind, especially when I'm nervous at parties.

✓ Student: So so, I remember things I'm interested in, but names often slip my mind, especially when I'm nervous at parties.

Use present simple 'slip' to match habitual action and subject 'names' with present tense; 'slipped' is past and inconsistent with 'I'm nervous' which indicates a general present condition. Also remove article 'the' before 'names' as speaking generally. Suggestion: use 'often slip my mind'.

× Student: Yes, of course. I once left my umbrella at a cafe because I was a was in a hurry and I also forgot my my friend's birthday, which was embarrassing, so I apologized and took them out for coffee to make up.

✓ Student: Yes, of course. I once left my umbrella at a cafe because I was in a hurry, and I also forgot my friend's birthday, which was embarrassing, so I apologized and took her out for coffee to make up.

Errors: duplicated words 'was a was' and 'my my' are typos; 'was in a hurry' should be 'was in a hurry' (remove extra 'a'); pronoun 'them' refers to 'friend' (singular) so use 'her' or 'him' depending on gender; maintain past tense consistency 'left', 'was', 'forgot', 'apologized', 'took'. Suggestion: proofread to remove duplicates and ensure pronoun agrees with noun.

× Student: I have to remember assignments and meeting schedules because missing them could cause me to fall behind at work or university. For example, I often reminders on my phone so I don't miss important appointments.

✓ Student: I have to remember assignments and meeting schedules because missing them could cause me to fall behind at work or university. For example, I often set reminders on my phone so I don't miss important appointments.

Missing verb 'set' before 'reminders' causes ungrammatical phrase. Insert verb 'set' to show action. Suggestion: use 'set reminders' or 'use reminders'.

× Student: I rely on tools like smartphone alarm and sticky notes. These features and audible reminders helps me stay organized, especially when I'm am busy and have a lot of text at once.

✓ Student: I rely on tools like a smartphone alarm and sticky notes. These features and audible reminders help me stay organized, especially when I'm busy and have a lot of tasks at once.

Add article 'a' before 'smartphone alarm' when singular; subject-verb agreement: 'features and audible reminders' is plural so verb should be 'help' not 'helps'; remove duplicate 'am am'; 'text' is likely wrong word for 'tasks'—use 'tasks'. Suggestion: ensure correct articles, verb agreement, and appropriate noun choice.