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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually can remember the details about story or movies, but I found I only good at remember something I'm interested in such as the Harry Potter's characters names.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, I once missed a important university assignment deadline because I had another urgent task at the time, so I wouldn't focus on the coursework. I learned from that experience and since then I try to plan my time better and set reminders to avoid the same mistake.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I need to remember a few things every day such as my starting schedule, every morning I need to learn some Spanish in application and I also make a point of remember to stay hydrated and eat regularly for my health.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I usually set a reminders and my phone calendar or I will write tasks down help me prevent from forgetting. For example, I use calendar notifications for meetings.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然流畅并纠正语法错误,避免重复。开头直接回应问题,然后用一两句具体细节支持,使用连接词使句子衔接更好。注意时态与动词形式(e.g. "I'm good at remembering"),以及冠词和复数形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I consider myself fairly good at remembering things. For instance, I can easily recall details from books or films, especially when I'm interested in them; I even remember many Harry Potter character names without effort.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 82.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好,但有语法和用词问题。第一个句子中冠词要用"an important",并修正逻辑表达("so I wouldn't focus"应为"so I couldn't focus"或"I didn't focus")。最后可以用一两句具体措施强化细节(例如具体用哪些工具或方法)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once missed an important university assignment deadline because I had another urgent task and couldn't focus on the coursework. Since then, I learned to plan my time better and now use calendar alerts and a to-do list app to make sure I don't miss deadlines.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答信息较多但句子结构混乱,应分成两到三句并使用连接词。注意词汇搭配("start time"或"daily schedule"比"starting schedule"更自然),动词形式("learn Spanish on an app","make a point of remembering")。加入具体例子(如具体学习时长)会更好。

Ví dụ: I need to remember a few daily things, such as my work start time and to study Spanish on an app each morning. I also make a point of remembering to drink enough water and eat regular meals to stay healthy.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 表达较清楚但有语法错误和词序问题。应使用一致的时态和更自然的短语("set reminders on my phone","write tasks down")。可以补充具体工具和习惯细节,比如使用 labels, deadlines 或复查清单来提高可信度。

Ví dụ: I usually set reminders on my phone and use the calendar, and I also write tasks down in a notebook. For example, I rely on calendar notifications for meetings and review my to-do list every evening to make sure nothing is missed.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I usually can remember the details about story or movies, but I found I only good at remember something I'm interested in such as the Harry Potter's characters names.

I can usually remember the details about stories or movies, but I found I'm only good at remembering things I'm interested in, such as the names of the Harry Potter characters.

错误类型:可数名词单复数使用错误,以及其他相关错误。说明:'story' 应为复数 'stories' 与 'movies' 保持一致;'only good at remember' 中 'remember' 需用动名词形式 'remembering';'something' 更自然用复数 'things';所有格 'the Harry Potter's characters names' 表达不当,应改为 'the names of the Harry Potter characters' 或 'Harry Potter character names'。建议:注意可数名词的单复数,掌握动词后接动名词的结构,并使用更自然的名词短语顺序。

Article errors

× I once missed a important university assignment deadline because I had another urgent task at the time, so I wouldn't focus on the coursework.

I once missed an important university assignment deadline because I had another urgent task at the time, so I couldn't focus on the coursework.

错误类型:冠词错误与情态动词/时态使用不当。说明:'a important' 中元音音素开头的单词前应使用不定冠词 'an';'so I wouldn't focus' 用法不符合语境,原意应表示当时无法集中注意力,需用过去时 'couldn't'。建议:注意 'a' 与 'an' 的使用规则(根据发音),并根据上下文选择合适的时态/情态动词。

Present tense issue

× I learned from that experience and since then I try to plan my time better and set reminders to avoid the same mistake.

I learned from that experience and since then I have tried to plan my time better and set reminders to avoid the same mistake.

错误类型:现在完成时与时间状语搭配错误。说明:'since then' 常与现在完成时连用,表达从过去到现在持续的动作或习惯变化,应使用 'have tried' 而不是简单现在时 'try'。建议:当句子含有 'since'、'for' 等表示持续时间的词时,优先考虑使用现在完成时。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember a few things every day such as my starting schedule, every morning I need to learn some Spanish in application and I also make a point of remember to stay hydrated and eat regularly for my health.

I need to remember a few things every day, such as my start time. Every morning I need to learn some Spanish on an app, and I also make a point of remembering to stay hydrated and eat regularly for my health.

错误类型:介词使用不当,动名词形式错误,名词短语表达不自然。说明:'starting schedule' 可改为更自然的 'start time';'learn some Spanish in application' 中介词应为 'on',且 'application' 常用 'app' 更口语;'make a point of remember' 中 'remember' 应为动名词 'remembering'。建议:注意常用搭配 'on an app',使用动名词 after 'make a point of',并用更自然的短语替换生硬表达。

Verb + -ing form

× I usually set a reminders and my phone calendar or I will write tasks down help me prevent from forgetting.

I usually set reminders and use my phone calendar, or I will write tasks down to help me avoid forgetting.

错误类型:动名词/不定式使用与冠词错误,短语顺序不当。说明:'set a reminders' 中冠词与复数不一致,应为 'set reminders';缺少动词 'use' 来描述 'my phone calendar' 的动作;'write tasks down help me' 应加不定式或连词 'to help me';常用搭配为 'avoid forgetting' 而不是 'prevent from forgetting'(后者结构不正确)。建议:注意冠词与名词数的一致性,使用正确的动词和不定式结构,以及常见搭配 'avoid + -ing'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestedAttentive; Concerned; Partisan
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