Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you are good at memorising things, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Avoid repetition and unclear references (e.g., 'code 19'). Use linking words like 'because' or 'however' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Not really. I struggle to memorise things, mainly because I get distracted easily and haven't practised memory techniques. For example, after I had COVID-19 a few years ago, I found it harder to retain new information, so I now rely on notes and reminders.

Gợi ý: Give a clear yes/no answer first, then support it with a specific example or reason. Use correct tense and reduce hesitation. Instead of repeating phrases, explain one situation when you either did or did not forget something important.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think so. If something is important to me, I make sure to set reminders or write it down, so I rarely forget. For instance, I always set calendar alerts for bill payments and appointments.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence about routine daily tasks you must remember. Provide specific examples (e.g., work tasks, appointments, meals) and explain briefly how you manage them. Avoid confusing phrasing and ungrammatical sentences.

Ví dụ: I need to remember a few routine things each day, such as my work schedule, taking medication, and meal times. Because my days are quite regular, I use alarms and a daily checklist to keep everything on track.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement of your main method, then give one or two specific details about how you use it. Use varied vocabulary (notes, reminders, calendar, alarms) and link ideas with words like 'so' or 'for example.' Avoid filler sounds and repeated words.

Ví dụ: I usually use my phone to remember important things. For example, I save notes in a notes app and set calendar events with alarms for deadlines or appointments, which ensures I get reminders in advance.

× I'm not good at memorising things because sometimes I don't memorise some of my memory.

✓ I'm not good at memorising things because sometimes I don't remember some things.

The verb 'memorise' is incorrectly used with 'memory' here. Use 'remember' for recalling things and say 'some things' rather than 'some of my memory'. Also 'good at' is correct; changing the verb and noun makes the sentence natural and grammatically correct.

× Umm it's related on I took the code 19 for some years ago.

✓ Umm it's related to the fact that I had COVID-19 a few years ago.

Use 'related to' not 'related on.' Also use 'had COVID-19' (past tense) rather than 'took the code 19', and 'a few years ago' instead of 'for some years ago.' This fixes preposition and idiomatic errors.

× I think I haven't ever forgotten something important because if I think this thing is very important to me and that time I I don't forgotten this thing.

✓ I think I have never forgotten anything important because if something is very important to me, I don't forget it.

Use present perfect 'have never forgotten' for life experience. 'Forgotten' is past participle and needs auxiliary 'have.' Replace 'something' with 'anything' in negatives, and use present simple 'don't forget' for habitual truth. Remove repeated 'I'.

× I don't need to remember in my daily life because my all days life is same.

✓ I don't need to remember much in my daily life because my daily routine is the same every day.

Phrase 'my all days life' is ungrammatical; use 'daily life' or 'daily routine.' Add 'much' after 'need to remember' to clarify meaning. Rephrase for natural word order.

× That's why it's my habit for that reason that I didn't.

✓ That's why it's a habit for me, so I didn't have to remember much.

Original sentence has unclear pronouns and tense. Use 'a habit for me' and clarify with 'didn't have to remember' to explain past consequence. This corrects pronoun reference and sentence clarity.

× I usually take notes in my cell phones free notes application.

✓ I usually take notes in my cellphone's free notes application.

Use singular 'cellphone' or 'cell phone' with possessive 'cellphone's.' 'Take notes in' is fine; adjust noun forms for correctness.

× This application usually helps a lot and I, uh, notes, I take a notes in my cell phone's calendar that's.

✓ This application helps a lot. I also take notes in my phone's calendar.

Original is disfluent and ungrammatical. Split into two clear sentences, remove filler words, use 'phone's calendar' and 'take notes' (not 'a notes'). This fixes sentence structure and plural agreement.